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Scene at a Cast Meeting

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Comment from nomi338
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Sounds like there might be a little bit of hostility going on between some of your characters there Bill. I thought there was going to be a little set to, maybe a little bit of fisticuffs if you will.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025
    It's coming.
Comment from jim vecchio
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This was a fine bit of comedic writing but it is hard for me to concentrate on it all, as there is a real tear-jerker on my TV now, "Attack Of The Killer Tomatos".

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
    Make sure to catch the sequel, Relax with the Killer Picante Sauce.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very well written script and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day and may you also have a wonderful weekend. May God bless you and I will be praying for your wife. Patricia.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
    Thank you, Patricia
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I think we should have FS members act out this piece. It could be sponsored by some mental health clinic. The question is...who would play Ned? That man has one brain cell and it's square. Lol thanks for the laugh

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
    Thank you, Marilyn
Comment from kahpot
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"the the first scene of the story" maybe one to many (the)
Bill has his hands full here, yet the comedy is hilarious, maybe Bill should try his hand at comedy, whether he knows it or not he is very good at it, glad to see the full lingo is back, very well written****kahpot

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
    Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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First of all, I am so glad to have caught your third scene on this. Starting off with the humor, I loved the Line, "Let's Get Intuit".
Or Bill's disembodies voice, Pallas' that's not a question, Knucklehead, Ned's fun humor, Pallas calling Ned a Ned-wetter. Brilliant!! There's too many to mention!

I love the humor of the script, and then when Fox says, "Hey Felix do you still wear that money belt?" And Felix's response.

And I love how Ned it not where he is supposed to be and gets everything mixed up. He is hilarious. Even DED gets frustrated keeping him on task.

Gosh, this is funny how these characters make fun of each other, change the scene around and come close to an all out brawl. The name calling is a hoot.

Thanks Bill for the best of the scenes so far. I am starting to know what to expect from each character more and more. I love it!!
Love, Debi

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
    Thank you, Debi, for the great feedback on this bunch of nuts.
Comment from lyenochka
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Poor Bill has his hands full with his characters all getting out of hand. Poor Ned has his name constantly reconfigured and he takes it all in stride. I liked the "fashion victim" comment. I hope DED's services aren't needed.
I wondered about:
Matt: Lay off him, Jif.
Pons: Good advice, Jif. (Shouldn't it be Good advice, Matt?)

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
    I saw that and considered that he was reinforcing the comment with a little stank.