No - Say It Ain't So!
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The good guys have taken it all down a few notches. Tom also got several hours of sleep, I hope. The Trump body behaved rather well. The Trump mind may be totally off the wall after all it has been through. This has been a great story that I have really enjoyed.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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The good guys have taken it all down a few notches. Tom also got several hours of sleep, I hope. The Trump body behaved rather well. The Trump mind may be totally off the wall after all it has been through. This has been a great story that I have really enjoyed.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you I appreciate your very kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Whew! Glad that the two unknown men went away without forcing their entrance into the house. Hope that Tom gets some sleep. I liked the comments about how Phil is trying to lose weight in Trump's body but Trump is gaining weight in Phil's body. I also liked the description of odd facial expression as "His smile looked like a cross-section of a wavy potato chip."
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Whew! Glad that the two unknown men went away without forcing their entrance into the house. Hope that Tom gets some sleep. I liked the comments about how Phil is trying to lose weight in Trump's body but Trump is gaining weight in Phil's body. I also liked the description of odd facial expression as "His smile looked like a cross-section of a wavy potato chip."
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I always anticipate and appreciate your reviews.
Comment from Ulla
Excellent story this is, although it's based on what is happening right before our eyes. When are you guys going to stand up and say No? The world is waiting. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Excellent story this is, although it's based on what is happening right before our eyes. When are you guys going to stand up and say No? The world is waiting. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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We guys are in the minority right now (if you accept the last election as valid). I think we are in about the same place Brits were when Brexit won. A redo would have painted a different story.
Thank you for the review.
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I think this is much worse than Brexit. That didn't wreck the world. This one does. My country and Canada are threatened. We were allies. Not so anymore. Ulla:)))
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You , of course, are right. Trump is way worse.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
"It was all he do to keep from grabbing" - add all he COULD do
I'm left wondering who the two men were and why they would not have broken in, or at least knocked, in order to make sure the place was empty.
Every time I see Trump now, I'll be thinking 'Lord of the Rings'!
xo
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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"It was all he do to keep from grabbing" - add all he COULD do
I'm left wondering who the two men were and why they would not have broken in, or at least knocked, in order to make sure the place was empty.
Every time I see Trump now, I'll be thinking 'Lord of the Rings'!
xo
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the catch.
Presumably, they were going to kidnap the occupant. They were Schlape's men. Guess I should point that out. (Schlape is my name for Michael Flynn)
Rings - wait until tomorrow!
Thanks again for your great review.
Comment from jim vecchio
Your story progresses well. I especially liked the line about being cheated on both ends. Speaking of cheating, today I posted a video about Abbott and Costello's "Two Tens For A Five Routine". What the readers don't know is that was a video of me when I morphed into Costello one day. That was my real money and Abbott cheated me out of it.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Your story progresses well. I especially liked the line about being cheated on both ends. Speaking of cheating, today I posted a video about Abbott and Costello's "Two Tens For A Five Routine". What the readers don't know is that was a video of me when I morphed into Costello one day. That was my real money and Abbott cheated me out of it.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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You gotta be a little quicker on your feet there, Lou. You can't cheat an honest man.
Thank you for your very nice review.
Comment from Karen Cherry
Nice and calm, that means it's about to blow. How many things can go wrong? An awful lot. You write this so well, but, I know it has to end. How about you writing a story about secret doings under the big top circa 1940? All their weird people are real, and need no makeup or specially fitted clothing to raise eyebrows. They take on genetically altered people that didn't do well with the government testing.........Karen
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Nice and calm, that means it's about to blow. How many things can go wrong? An awful lot. You write this so well, but, I know it has to end. How about you writing a story about secret doings under the big top circa 1940? All their weird people are real, and need no makeup or specially fitted clothing to raise eyebrows. They take on genetically altered people that didn't do well with the government testing.........Karen
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Been done - 'Water for Elephants' by Sara Gruen.
But thank you for the great review!
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Oh, I liked that story. Karen
Comment from Wendy G
As "you-know-who" doesn't read books, whatever you say will not be held against you, which is probably just as well. Chaos continues unabated in your story as poor Phil tries to perform a noble service to the US. Well done!
Wendy
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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As "you-know-who" doesn't read books, whatever you say will not be held against you, which is probably just as well. Chaos continues unabated in your story as poor Phil tries to perform a noble service to the US. Well done!
Wendy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much! It was not just fun to write, but therapeutic.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Fun , fun the storyand show myst go on and why not with some pathetic and mundane. And yet who's leading the pack thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Fun , fun the storyand show myst go on and why not with some pathetic and mundane. And yet who's leading the pack thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much! It was not just fun to write, but therapeutic.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This president's life is amazingly ordinary which he doesn't know how to do. Trump's life is chaotic and always news worthy, deporting the illegal aliens, trying to persuade Russians and Ukrainians stop fighting, dealing with all the hatred Elon Musk generated, the new crypto policy, the reform of social security and the new military gadget like F-47. Have I missed anything? I'm sure I have.
Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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This president's life is amazingly ordinary which he doesn't know how to do. Trump's life is chaotic and always news worthy, deporting the illegal aliens, trying to persuade Russians and Ukrainians stop fighting, dealing with all the hatred Elon Musk generated, the new crypto policy, the reform of social security and the new military gadget like F-47. Have I missed anything? I'm sure I have.
Well done.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much! It was not just fun to write, but therapeutic.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an interesting approach to write from a multiple point of view. Your characters certainly have their work cut out to remain focused, you have succeeded well in this task kay.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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This is an interesting approach to write from a multiple point of view. Your characters certainly have their work cut out to remain focused, you have succeeded well in this task kay.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much! It was not just fun to write, but therapeutic.
I wasn't sure whether I needed to rewrite the entire thing in 3rd person or try this. I felt that I would lose too much of the passion in 3rd person.
