No - Say It Ain't So!
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very good and very active chapter. Sounds as if Tom will have an interesting scar from his ordeal. I suspect Trump's people, who are always around him, have to talk to him like Phil does.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Very good and very active chapter. Sounds as if Tom will have an interesting scar from his ordeal. I suspect Trump's people, who are always around him, have to talk to him like Phil does.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry
I have read the books and seen the movies many times, I doubt I could have riffed any better. This is so engrossing. Are you sure this needs to end any time soon?
Karen
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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I have read the books and seen the movies many times, I doubt I could have riffed any better. This is so engrossing. Are you sure this needs to end any time soon?
Karen
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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smiley face here
Best encouragement ever! Thank you.
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You are welcome. Karen
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You play on all of Trump's weaknesses here, like his love for fast food. And you play up his stupidity, which has probably gotten you into some trouble here.
It sounds like this story is winding up, with a better ending than the one reality appears to be giving us.
See you soon!
xo
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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You play on all of Trump's weaknesses here, like his love for fast food. And you play up his stupidity, which has probably gotten you into some trouble here.
It sounds like this story is winding up, with a better ending than the one reality appears to be giving us.
See you soon!
xo
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Yes on all counts. But Trump makes it so easy!
Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
Tom is so imaginative - and how he keeps going, I have no idea. Maybe he too is drinking lot sof Diet Coke. I enjoyed the pace and the drama of these two chapters - and also the humour (or should I say satire?) Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Tom is so imaginative - and how he keeps going, I have no idea. Maybe he too is drinking lot sof Diet Coke. I enjoyed the pace and the drama of these two chapters - and also the humour (or should I say satire?) Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much. Phil and Tom make a team.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter was a wild ride! I loved every bit of it! I especially enjoyed how you handled Trump's character. Especially the little details like his reaction to peeing outside - hilarious. The whole Bilbo moment was brilliant too. This was funny and a joy to read. Great work!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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This chapter was a wild ride! I loved every bit of it! I especially enjoyed how you handled Trump's character. Especially the little details like his reaction to peeing outside - hilarious. The whole Bilbo moment was brilliant too. This was funny and a joy to read. Great work!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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Thank you. It was fun writing. I could live in that world.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear! Now I'm concerned that Tom is not getting enough sleep. I know that Trump and Phil have to stay awake to prevent switching when asleep but Tom is living in both their realities and awake as much as they are! Hope he patches up the razor wire cuts. I had to smile about the chase scene as it reminded me about your other book getting revenge on bad truckers.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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Oh dear! Now I'm concerned that Tom is not getting enough sleep. I know that Trump and Phil have to stay awake to prevent switching when asleep but Tom is living in both their realities and awake as much as they are! Hope he patches up the razor wire cuts. I had to smile about the chase scene as it reminded me about your other book getting revenge on bad truckers.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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smiling here
Thank you for your great review.
And don't worry about Tom. He's young and can recover.
Comment from jim vecchio
You were wise again to double the chapters. This was one of the most exciting segments yet. The car chase reminded me of the time I was headed for my psychiatrist, I mean my talking doctor, when I suddenly morphed from my slow moving automobile to the car Stev3e McQueen was driving in "Bullitt". In McQueen's body, I underwent speeds of up to 120 mph. The driving was done in segments and more than one vehicle. It took three weeks for the ten minute shot. At the very end I morphed back into my own vehicle, carsick.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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You were wise again to double the chapters. This was one of the most exciting segments yet. The car chase reminded me of the time I was headed for my psychiatrist, I mean my talking doctor, when I suddenly morphed from my slow moving automobile to the car Stev3e McQueen was driving in "Bullitt". In McQueen's body, I underwent speeds of up to 120 mph. The driving was done in segments and more than one vehicle. It took three weeks for the ten minute shot. At the very end I morphed back into my own vehicle, carsick.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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'68 Mustang GT - super car!
Thank you for the fun review!
Comment from Stacy M.S.
I have to say you have penned a very interesting story!
There seems to be plenty of action, and chaos...which usually makes for a nice page-turner!
I also found it a bit humorous, imagining Trump being anyone but Trump.
Very well-written installment!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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I have to say you have penned a very interesting story!
There seems to be plenty of action, and chaos...which usually makes for a nice page-turner!
I also found it a bit humorous, imagining Trump being anyone but Trump.
Very well-written installment!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I appreciate your great review.
