Veil of Secrets
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Epilogue - Veil of Secrets"Mystery/Crime and Ghosts
14 total reviews
Comment from eliz100
You have done an excellent job wrapping up this book. It looks as if you have left a door open to continue the story. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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You have done an excellent job wrapping up this book. It looks as if you have left a door open to continue the story. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This was a wonderful and addictive book with all the action, adventure, double-dealing, and love anyone could want. I also enjoy your hint about the next book to come. I can hardly wait for it to start.
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This was a wonderful and addictive book with all the action, adventure, double-dealing, and love anyone could want. I also enjoy your hint about the next book to come. I can hardly wait for it to start.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love this ending where you leave us with our imagination taking off. Great way to give the women a new start and well done Carol. I look forward to any future adventures with Eleanor. Cheers
Valda
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Love this ending where you leave us with our imagination taking off. Great way to give the women a new start and well done Carol. I look forward to any future adventures with Eleanor. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
Comment from royowen
I think you might have left this epilogue and open ended one, with everyone getting acquainted, and people getting married withpropasal given a implied, and no a mysterious call from England, well done Carol, great story, blessings Roy
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I think you might have left this epilogue and open ended one, with everyone getting acquainted, and people getting married withpropasal given a implied, and no a mysterious call from England, well done Carol, great story, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute ending and you still left the door open for a new adventure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and I want to read a continuation.
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Cute ending and you still left the door open for a new adventure. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and I want to read a continuation.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Our friends are going to get a long break. I see another problem is going to need to solved. I enjoyed reading this story or stories.
Rebecca's gaze met hers. "No, of course not. You are free to make your own choices. You may go if you wish, but those who prefer to stay are more than welcome." & Across the room, Garth and Rebecca were comfortable with his arm wrapped around her shoulders. (I'm confused how Rebecca and be at two celebrations at once.
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Our friends are going to get a long break. I see another problem is going to need to solved. I enjoyed reading this story or stories.
Rebecca's gaze met hers. "No, of course not. You are free to make your own choices. You may go if you wish, but those who prefer to stay are more than welcome." & Across the room, Garth and Rebecca were comfortable with his arm wrapped around her shoulders. (I'm confused how Rebecca and be at two celebrations at once.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
Well deserving of the shiny stars here, Carol.
You have wound everything up and at the same time, given us multiple things to think about and hints at a future mystery. I am sure this points towards the next book.
Looking forward to it.
Tim x
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Well deserving of the shiny stars here, Carol.
You have wound everything up and at the same time, given us multiple things to think about and hints at a future mystery. I am sure this points towards the next book.
Looking forward to it.
Tim x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent epilogue, giving glimpses at all of them released from the intensity of what they have all been enduring. All the characters have found resolution - but now who is this phoning Kristen - and who is the man found unconscious? Seems like you're preparing us for another wild ride? Congratulations on your book - it's a wonderful accomplishment, - and now we can sit back and relax, knowing all is well, for a day or two ... until the next big thing! Well done.
Wendy
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An excellent epilogue, giving glimpses at all of them released from the intensity of what they have all been enduring. All the characters have found resolution - but now who is this phoning Kristen - and who is the man found unconscious? Seems like you're preparing us for another wild ride? Congratulations on your book - it's a wonderful accomplishment, - and now we can sit back and relax, knowing all is well, for a day or two ... until the next big thing! Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
This entire project was outstanding. It was obvious you poured your heart and soul into each character and each chapter. Your profound understanding and awareness of human nature was evident in the development of each character. You allowed us to understand each character's feelings and motivations, but you caused us to fall in love with Eleanor. Every chapter was filled with heartfelt emotion, as well as mystery and suspense.
Thank you for an enjoyable, entertaining, and satisfying roller coaster ride.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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This entire project was outstanding. It was obvious you poured your heart and soul into each character and each chapter. Your profound understanding and awareness of human nature was evident in the development of each character. You allowed us to understand each character's feelings and motivations, but you caused us to fall in love with Eleanor. Every chapter was filled with heartfelt emotion, as well as mystery and suspense.
Thank you for an enjoyable, entertaining, and satisfying roller coaster ride.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank yo so much for always enjoying and encouraging me with your thoughts on my stories. I so appreciate it and feel motivated to write more.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, for so many reasons I never really got into this story. It was never intentional. Things in my life just took over, but now I'm back in full form. I hope you understand. Hugs, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Hi Carol, for so many reasons I never really got into this story. It was never intentional. Things in my life just took over, but now I'm back in full form. I hope you understand. Hugs, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Of course. I do. Life takes control sometimes and things happen and though we'd like to do one thing, other things take over. No problem. I hope you can read the next one. How's your chapter coming along?
Smiles, Carol
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Thanks for understanding. I will be following your next one.
Now, realistically, my chapter will be out on Thursday. The whole concept of your challenge is great. I love it. Ulla xxx
