Veil of Secrets
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14 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Maggie is safe, the three most important words in the English language. I can understand her parent's gratitude, although I don't quite buy the falling on the floor without dire consequences. How about falling into the bedside chair? Jack and Garth just might become real friends.
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Maggie is safe, the three most important words in the English language. I can understand her parent's gratitude, although I don't quite buy the falling on the floor without dire consequences. How about falling into the bedside chair? Jack and Garth just might become real friends.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The story continues...The question will they get Zang? I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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This is another excellent chapter. The story continues...The question will they get Zang? I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
Comment from royowen
I love your characters, I don't their collective pride would be welcome in Heaven, but I was reading 1corinthians 13;1-8, and I can believe anything. I love your characters, strong, stunning, unyielding and courageous, and bad tempered too, I forgot about arrogant. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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I love your characters, I don't their collective pride would be welcome in Heaven, but I was reading 1corinthians 13;1-8, and I can believe anything. I love your characters, strong, stunning, unyielding and courageous, and bad tempered too, I forgot about arrogant. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
Comment from Carol Clark2
Great chapter! The dialogue between Jack and Garth is great -- It was good of Jack to help in Maggie's rescue and to call in a favor for the plane. So glad Maggie is back with Jenna and Donatelli. Eleanor did a great job. Blessings. Carol
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Great chapter! The dialogue between Jack and Garth is great -- It was good of Jack to help in Maggie's rescue and to call in a favor for the plane. So glad Maggie is back with Jenna and Donatelli. Eleanor did a great job. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, you hit the spot with the description of a commercial airline:) "Jack smirked over the rim of his glass. "C-37A Gulfstream. Courtesy of a favor I called in at the Pentagon. Quieter and far more relaxing than crying babies and reheated pasta." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Wow, you hit the spot with the description of a commercial airline:) "Jack smirked over the rim of his glass. "C-37A Gulfstream. Courtesy of a favor I called in at the Pentagon. Quieter and far more relaxing than crying babies and reheated pasta." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
Excellent writing as ever, Carol.
The reunion of Maggie at the hospital was very well written and had even my jaded heart skipping a bit with it.
Now just have to get to Heathrow and catch a bad guy.
Tim x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Excellent writing as ever, Carol.
The reunion of Maggie at the hospital was very well written and had even my jaded heart skipping a bit with it.
Now just have to get to Heathrow and catch a bad guy.
Tim x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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I always have to throw some heart jerking moments in there to keep the story on an evil key and the readers a moment to catch their breath... Thanks so much for enjoying the chapter.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A good scene and dialogue between Jack and Garth and both feeling the emotions of getting baby Maggie back to her parents. Now they're whiing through the skies to get their man. Well done, Carol.
cheers
valda
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A good scene and dialogue between Jack and Garth and both feeling the emotions of getting baby Maggie back to her parents. Now they're whiing through the skies to get their man. Well done, Carol.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm so glad to read Maggie is finally with her parents. Your description of Jenna's reaction when she saw Maggie is perfect. I could see her AND feel her shock and joy. Now I look forward to Zhang's reaction when he sees Garth in England. This was another satisfying chapter.
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I'm so glad to read Maggie is finally with her parents. Your description of Jenna's reaction when she saw Maggie is perfect. I could see her AND feel her shock and joy. Now I look forward to Zhang's reaction when he sees Garth in England. This was another satisfying chapter.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
Comment from Wendy G
Very glad to see that Maggie is back with her parents - a moving scene. And Zhang Wei - I wish I could see his face when he sees Garth waiting for him. Excellent descriptions and vivid scenes.
Well done.
Wendy
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Very glad to see that Maggie is back with her parents - a moving scene. And Zhang Wei - I wish I could see his face when he sees Garth waiting for him. Excellent descriptions and vivid scenes.
Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a great addition to the book. I am so glad Maggie is back with her parents. I can't wait until they catch Zhang and put him behind bars.
Well done
Cecilia
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Carol,
This is a great addition to the book. I am so glad Maggie is back with her parents. I can't wait until they catch Zhang and put him behind bars.
Well done
Cecilia
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Comment Written 16-Mar-2025
