No - Say It Ain't So!
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Comment from Wendy G
Feeling sorry for Phil and his poor feet. But it would be a disaster if they were to switch right now and Trump would be complaining about his feet. Getting complicated with all the uncertainty about exactly who can be trusted ....
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Feeling sorry for Phil and his poor feet. But it would be a disaster if they were to switch right now and Trump would be complaining about his feet. Getting complicated with all the uncertainty about exactly who can be trusted ....
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you. Disaster lurks.
I appreciate your continued support.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
That was a miserable night for Phil. The description of what went on at that house doesn't sound like what Phil experienced. Hopefully he is still Phil in Phil's body so Trump doesn't have to figure out how his feet got all cut up. Paragraph seven you need to change spelling of bows to boughs off some of the pine . . .
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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That was a miserable night for Phil. The description of what went on at that house doesn't sound like what Phil experienced. Hopefully he is still Phil in Phil's body so Trump doesn't have to figure out how his feet got all cut up. Paragraph seven you need to change spelling of bows to boughs off some of the pine . . .
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the great review and for the catch.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, this is really the spy stuff but poor Phil is not used to this kind of danger but it's good that it was him as Trump in Phil's body would not have made it through all that chaos. I don't know the Stephen King book alluded to, but I'm sure others do.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Well, this is really the spy stuff but poor Phil is not used to this kind of danger but it's good that it was him as Trump in Phil's body would not have made it through all that chaos. I don't know the Stephen King book alluded to, but I'm sure others do.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much!
The King book was based on a true story of a young girl lost in the woods for days. (Not one of his terror/monster stories.)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story kept me hooked from start to finish! The tension was real. I felt every moment of Phil's struggle. The little details like using skivvies for bandages made everything feel so real. And that last bit with Tom and Hakeem? Perfect! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep going - this is an enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Your story kept me hooked from start to finish! The tension was real. I felt every moment of Phil's struggle. The little details like using skivvies for bandages made everything feel so real. And that last bit with Tom and Hakeem? Perfect! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep going - this is an enjoyable read.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I wish I dared post it somewhere without getting skewered by MAGA.
Comment from jim vecchio
A very exciting chapter. Phil's ordeal in the cold made me recall the time I opened the refrigerator and morphed into a bottle of soy sauce. I was there for two months. You'd be surprised at how seldom people use soy sauce. Meanwhile, the soy sauce/me wrote and published several works of free unrhymed poetry.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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A very exciting chapter. Phil's ordeal in the cold made me recall the time I opened the refrigerator and morphed into a bottle of soy sauce. I was there for two months. You'd be surprised at how seldom people use soy sauce. Meanwhile, the soy sauce/me wrote and published several works of free unrhymed poetry.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Unrhymed, huh? Too bad.
I've known soy sauce to grow whiskers.
Thanks for the review!
