Lipstick Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Revenge in Disguise"After a lifetime of suffering, Tess’s world shatte
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am going to have to start at the beginning, this chapter has really hooked me. It seems Tess is out for revenge for what they did to her mother. I like that! This was very well written, my friend. Well done. :)) Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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I am going to have to start at the beginning, this chapter has really hooked me. It seems Tess is out for revenge for what they did to her mother. I like that! This was very well written, my friend. Well done. :)) Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Thank you for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Tess is determined to avenge her mother's death now but that's not how she originally started out. If I say any more I'll give the first three chapters away.
Thank you again for your wonderful review and marvelous five stars, take care.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, madame murder on high kills, strikes again. I guess her list is still growing. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Wow, madame murder on high kills, strikes again. I guess her list is still growing. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the next chapter.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you for reading my chapter. Yes, Tess is far from done. Unless of course the cops figure it out. Thank you again for reading my chapter and kind wishes, take care.
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Thank you for reading my chapter. Yes, Tess is far from done. Unless of course the cops figure it out. Thank you again for reading my chapter and kind wishes, take care.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and it flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation all make it a very good piece to listen to as well. May you have a wonderful weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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This is very well written and it flows very well when it is read aloud. Your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation all make it a very good piece to listen to as well. May you have a wonderful weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you for listening to my story. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You have a wonderful weekend as well.
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Thank you for listening to my story. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You have a wonderful weekend as well.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, your chapter had me hooked from the start! Tess is such a fascinating character! I loved how she moved through the party with such charm. That moment with the disguised weapon was brilliant! The tension built up so well. Especially when Emily started questioning things. I can't wait to see what Tess does next. Fantastic work!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Wow, your chapter had me hooked from the start! Tess is such a fascinating character! I loved how she moved through the party with such charm. That moment with the disguised weapon was brilliant! The tension built up so well. Especially when Emily started questioning things. I can't wait to see what Tess does next. Fantastic work!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Thank you for reading my chapter and for your kind review. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. Tess is determined to avenge her mother's death.
Thank you again for your wonderful review, take care.
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Thank you for reading my chapter and for your kind review. I'm so glad you're enjoying my story. Tess is determined to avenge her mother's death.
Thank you again for your wonderful review, take care.
