No - Say It Ain't So!
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Comment from Faith Williams
This chapter almost makes me feel sorry for Trump. Almost. But then I turn on the news.
Suggestion to consider:
Where are you away to. I believe there should be a question mark here.
It'll be interesting to see what Trump does in his paranoia and how he is going to attempt to figure out things. Looking forward to see where you lead us, Wayne.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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This chapter almost makes me feel sorry for Trump. Almost. But then I turn on the news.
Suggestion to consider:
Where are you away to. I believe there should be a question mark here.
It'll be interesting to see what Trump does in his paranoia and how he is going to attempt to figure out things. Looking forward to see where you lead us, Wayne.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I just wish I could get the rest of it posted NOW! Before Trump and Musk destroy everything.
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, he's certainly sounding real - as if he is losing it altogether. He still doesn't seem to realise that he's actually been switched into another person for days at a time. Now please have Phil Jansen reverse Trump's decisions about grabbing or buying whole countries (or bullying them into submission) - he was only elected to represent the US as it presently is, not grasp other countries, as precipitated a couple of world wars. Is he going to use Ukraine's mineral wealth to finance his schemes for making the US great again? Ugh.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Yes, he's certainly sounding real - as if he is losing it altogether. He still doesn't seem to realise that he's actually been switched into another person for days at a time. Now please have Phil Jansen reverse Trump's decisions about grabbing or buying whole countries (or bullying them into submission) - he was only elected to represent the US as it presently is, not grasp other countries, as precipitated a couple of world wars. Is he going to use Ukraine's mineral wealth to finance his schemes for making the US great again? Ugh.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your great review.
Phil can't keep up with reality. But I'm goin' as fast as I can. (ugh face here)
Trump is a sick man. I just can't believe so many Americans voted for him. One of Musk's children was caught saying something about what his dad did to get Trump elected, but was quickly hushed. We may never know.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Trump is really confused and paranoid because he doesn't remember going to Hawaii, Alaska, or MirLago but his body did all three. At least he still believes in Musk.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Trump is really confused and paranoid because he doesn't remember going to Hawaii, Alaska, or MirLago but his body did all three. At least he still believes in Musk.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your very kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Well, it sounds like he's really beginning to lose it! At least, Phil is more aware of the situation and the possible switches. Trump doesn't seem to know what has happened and perhaps he really will get committed!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Well, it sounds like he's really beginning to lose it! At least, Phil is more aware of the situation and the possible switches. Trump doesn't seem to know what has happened and perhaps he really will get committed!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you!
I almost feel sorry that I have painted Trump to be so pitiful... but not. He does not have to be such a bully or so mean. He does not have to be so greedy. He does not have to be such a traitor to our allies.
(If he lets Taiwan fall, how safe is South Korea? If he is willing to drop NATO, how sure are we of SEATO?
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Oh, I know! That's one of the many reasons I feared his reelection - he's far too chummy with dictators like Putin and Kim Jung-Un. His supporters couldn't care less about South Korea and all the electronics built there.
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I think it's only because he's so busy with Musk and golf that he hasn't spoken of withdrawing troops fro S. Korea.
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Head to desk. Sigh.
Comment from royowen
What an interesting post, I'm not sure what the plot's about, but the theme might be about a delusional person who thinks he's Donald Trump, in this crazy world of modern politics perhaps that's the norm, well done Wayne, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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What an interesting post, I'm not sure what the plot's about, but the theme might be about a delusional person who thinks he's Donald Trump, in this crazy world of modern politics perhaps that's the norm, well done Wayne, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the review. Trump and a guy named Phil suddenly began switching bodies. Phil is trying to undo Trump's actions.
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Good on him, heh heh
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Body switching.
Thank you for the review.
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Thanks Wayne
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, your this chapter pulled me in! The dialogue is excellent. I could feel the paranoia building. I love how you keep the tension high - it's like being inside his head as everything spirals. That moment when he realizes he has no one to trust is so powerful. You've got something here! Can't wait to see where this goes!
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Wow, your this chapter pulled me in! The dialogue is excellent. I could feel the paranoia building. I love how you keep the tension high - it's like being inside his head as everything spirals. That moment when he realizes he has no one to trust is so powerful. You've got something here! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Thank you. I wish I could jump to the end. 15 more chapters.
Comment from jim vecchio
An interesting chapter, all real Trump. That medical business at the start caused me to remember awhile back when I morphed into a patient and Dr. Kildaire took good care of me, always with a smile on his face. Then, suddenly, I was in Ben Casey's hospital bed, and he always had a frown on his face. I switched back and forth for awhile, then ended up with Marcus Welby.
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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An interesting chapter, all real Trump. That medical business at the start caused me to remember awhile back when I morphed into a patient and Dr. Kildaire took good care of me, always with a smile on his face. Then, suddenly, I was in Ben Casey's hospital bed, and he always had a frown on his face. I switched back and forth for awhile, then ended up with Marcus Welby.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 07-Mar-2025
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Kildaire, Casey, or Welby - I suppose it matters whether you are female and want to kiss your Dr., want cured, or prefer to have an exotic disease.
Thank you for the review!
