Veil of Secrets
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12 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
What I find sad is that there are people in this world that are just like Zhang, no heart and no conscience about what or who they sell. Another great chapter Carol.
Cheers
Valda
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What I find sad is that there are people in this world that are just like Zhang, no heart and no conscience about what or who they sell. Another great chapter Carol.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 09-Mar-2025
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
They need to work fast, or Maggie will be gone for good. If she is on her way to England, the 'adoption' will take place very fast. This has changed the game as far as the gang are concerned, and they won't rest until they get her back, and put Zhang away. Off to the next one. Love you lots. Sandra xx
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They need to work fast, or Maggie will be gone for good. If she is on her way to England, the 'adoption' will take place very fast. This has changed the game as far as the gang are concerned, and they won't rest until they get her back, and put Zhang away. Off to the next one. Love you lots. Sandra xx
Comment Written 08-Mar-2025
Comment from Carol Clark2
Finally they're talking about finding little Maggie. Her mother must be frantic, wondering where she is. Thankfully Donatelli has been working on finding missing children. Let's hope his files give some clues. Blessings. Carol
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Finally they're talking about finding little Maggie. Her mother must be frantic, wondering where she is. Thankfully Donatelli has been working on finding missing children. Let's hope his files give some clues. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 07-Mar-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Excellent my friend. I am glad Eleanor, so to speak smacked the group back to their senses. They need to focus on Maggie and where she sis before it's too late.
Great job
Cecilia
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Carol,
Excellent my friend. I am glad Eleanor, so to speak smacked the group back to their senses. They need to focus on Maggie and where she sis before it's too late.
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 06-Mar-2025
Comment from Wendy G
Rosalie is safe from Zhang while she's with Garland , but is she safe with him? Unlikely, but he's probably easier to manage. And good for Eleanor reminding them of the priority of finding Maggie, which will also expose more of Zhang Wei's nefarious activities.
Wendy
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Rosalie is safe from Zhang while she's with Garland , but is she safe with him? Unlikely, but he's probably easier to manage. And good for Eleanor reminding them of the priority of finding Maggie, which will also expose more of Zhang Wei's nefarious activities.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I'm still not certain where Rosalie and Garland fit in, but Zhang is their enemy and also the enemy of all those who met at the Veraci estate. If only they aren't too late to save the baby.
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I'm still not certain where Rosalie and Garland fit in, but Zhang is their enemy and also the enemy of all those who met at the Veraci estate. If only they aren't too late to save the baby.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
I was beginning to feel like Eleanor. All sorts of suspenseful things were happening and no one was talking about Maggie. Eleanor should feel like they're on track now. Each chapter revs up the excitement. Well done.
Typo:
"I believe Matthew might have known something," the ghost detective said, his voice steady. (her voice...Danni was speaking)
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I was beginning to feel like Eleanor. All sorts of suspenseful things were happening and no one was talking about Maggie. Eleanor should feel like they're on track now. Each chapter revs up the excitement. Well done.
Typo:
"I believe Matthew might have known something," the ghost detective said, his voice steady. (her voice...Danni was speaking)
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. It seems that Garland and Rosalie are playing fewer games. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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This is another excellent chapter. It seems that Garland and Rosalie are playing fewer games. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
Comment from royowen
As they say, the plot thickens, it looks like even men like Judge Garland are attracted to become vulnerable to someone, and Rosalie is the certainly the one, she confesses to Garland, she's being pursued by Zheng's men.
Now we see Garth, Danni and Eleanor fossicking through Donatello's files for clues into finding Maggie, well done, blessings Roy
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As they say, the plot thickens, it looks like even men like Judge Garland are attracted to become vulnerable to someone, and Rosalie is the certainly the one, she confesses to Garland, she's being pursued by Zheng's men.
Now we see Garth, Danni and Eleanor fossicking through Donatello's files for clues into finding Maggie, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, this chapter pulls me right in! The tension between Rosalie and Garland is so well done. I love how you show her hesitance without saying it outright. The emotions (especially Eleanor's outburst) is perfect. I can feel how personal this fight is. This is a fantastic chapter!
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Wow, this chapter pulls me right in! The tension between Rosalie and Garland is so well done. I love how you show her hesitance without saying it outright. The emotions (especially Eleanor's outburst) is perfect. I can feel how personal this fight is. This is a fantastic chapter!
Comment Written 05-Mar-2025
