Veil of Secrets
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12 total reviews
Comment from Carol Clark2
I love the way Eleanor slipped in while the lawyer was talking with the two men, and then appeared ever so briefly, just to them. A fun scene! Well, the drug dealing and the attempts on Donatelli's life seem to be connected, but there are so many things yet to figure out. Good chapter!
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I love the way Eleanor slipped in while the lawyer was talking with the two men, and then appeared ever so briefly, just to them. A fun scene! Well, the drug dealing and the attempts on Donatelli's life seem to be connected, but there are so many things yet to figure out. Good chapter!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Who knows maybe those two will spill the beans about Zhang and the baby and finally justice will be served. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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Who knows maybe those two will spill the beans about Zhang and the baby and finally justice will be served. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
There are two very frightened low-level bad guys that keep seeing a strange woman appearing and disappearing. Their lawyer abandoned their case when they explained it to her.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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There are two very frightened low-level bad guys that keep seeing a strange woman appearing and disappearing. Their lawyer abandoned their case when they explained it to her.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thank you as always for reading and enjoying another chapter. I appreciate very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You keep the story moving, which keeps it exciting. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. You keep the story moving, which keeps it exciting. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for reading another chapter and for enjoying ti. I appreciate your time and comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
So, it seems we have another shady judge to replace John Doyle, he's not dead just living in someone else's body, or at least the same sort of principles, when it's crooked at the top, it will surely filter down, some new characters, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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So, it seems we have another shady judge to replace John Doyle, he's not dead just living in someone else's body, or at least the same sort of principles, when it's crooked at the top, it will surely filter down, some new characters, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Garland saw an opening with Doyle gone and thought he'd try on his shoes. He'll discover they don't fit as well as he expected.
Smiles, Carol
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That's true
Comment from Wendy G
It doesn't say much for American judges that here is another otally corrupt one. And Miss Rosalie is obviously well up in allt he action. She just asked the one question - and didn't know Eleanor was listening to them incriminating themselves and others. Very humorous!
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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It doesn't say much for American judges that here is another otally corrupt one. And Miss Rosalie is obviously well up in allt he action. She just asked the one question - and didn't know Eleanor was listening to them incriminating themselves and others. Very humorous!
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Unfortunately, I don't mean to sound cynacle, but our American government and justice system seems to be falling apart and I fear what will be left. Thanks so much for your review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I was glad to see a new judge in town, but heck, he's crooked also. Plus, there's a mystery man...The Voice. Thankfully we have a mysterious girl,,,Eleanor.
To be honest, beginning with the opening statement, this sounds like a completely new and different story, with an unknown character smuggling drugs. It was interesting Ms. Rosalie said, "If you think I'm going back to Mr. Wei..." So we now know Zhang sent the two thugs. Still, characters we know are there and Maggi will be thought about soon, I'm sure. Can't wait to see what happens.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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I was glad to see a new judge in town, but heck, he's crooked also. Plus, there's a mystery man...The Voice. Thankfully we have a mysterious girl,,,Eleanor.
To be honest, beginning with the opening statement, this sounds like a completely new and different story, with an unknown character smuggling drugs. It was interesting Ms. Rosalie said, "If you think I'm going back to Mr. Wei..." So we now know Zhang sent the two thugs. Still, characters we know are there and Maggi will be thought about soon, I'm sure. Can't wait to see what happens.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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I doubt we will have seen the last of Judge Garland when this story raps up, but one never knows for sure. Finding Zhang is the top priority or clues to where Maggie is. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
What on earth, Carol, is up with the Judges in this darn town?
Or are all American Judges corrupt?
OK, I know the majority of the Supreme Court over the pond is currently bought and paid for, but fiction mirroring reality.
You go girl LOL
Tim x
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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What on earth, Carol, is up with the Judges in this darn town?
Or are all American Judges corrupt?
OK, I know the majority of the Supreme Court over the pond is currently bought and paid for, but fiction mirroring reality.
You go girl LOL
Tim x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Probably just about all of government and judical offices are operating as if they are all that matters and the little people aren't worth anything at all. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Another great chapter eead before I break for breakfast. Loved that Eleanor had a little fun with the two crims, and took the smirk from Lawyer Rosalie's face, Well done, Carol.
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Another great chapter eead before I break for breakfast. Loved that Eleanor had a little fun with the two crims, and took the smirk from Lawyer Rosalie's face, Well done, Carol.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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For breakfast? What an honor that you started your day off with my story and read so many. I am blessed. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I've gotten to when I click on your post, I go back and make sure I've read the previous post. I don't want to read them out of order.
Okay, we're sure we have a mole and now we have those two on their way to a safe place, so they won't get murdered in prison. We also know who's partially in charge. I do like this story.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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I've gotten to when I click on your post, I go back and make sure I've read the previous post. I don't want to read them out of order.
Okay, we're sure we have a mole and now we have those two on their way to a safe place, so they won't get murdered in prison. We also know who's partially in charge. I do like this story.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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I'm trying to spread myself out...writing things I've never tried...like poetry and now scripts. I also like when I write a story with two endings...or a multi-author story... so maybe when this story in ended, I will slow down with the next one. It's hard when I have some loyal readers sitting on the edge of their chairs saying "Come on, Where's the next one." I'm blessed.
Smiles, Carol
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I understand, I have the same thing. I feel the need to edit constantly so I put out the best product I can, so I only post my novel once a week. The rest of the week, I edit it.
