Veil of Secrets
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Veil of Secrets - Chap 45"Mystery/Crime and Ghosts
12 total reviews
Comment from royowen
With new string characters filtering into your story, a new interesting phase is starting to emerge, is this a new book, or just one continuous conglomerate Carol? I thought the other would have finished with the winding up of the tunnels, Miriam, Antonio, the demise of Cornelius etc., well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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With new string characters filtering into your story, a new interesting phase is starting to emerge, is this a new book, or just one continuous conglomerate Carol? I thought the other would have finished with the winding up of the tunnels, Miriam, Antonio, the demise of Cornelius etc., well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Since the characters and the Vineyard wee so entwined with each other I've wrapped up some of the story and am finally headed to find Zhang and Maggie.
Thanks as always, Smiles, Carol
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That's true
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Good tactics from Eleanor throwing that tray of organs. Loved the SPLAT and then again. Amusing and very effective from Eleanor and from your writer's brain. Leaves me with a smile, cheers
valda
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Good tactics from Eleanor throwing that tray of organs. Loved the SPLAT and then again. Amusing and very effective from Eleanor and from your writer's brain. Leaves me with a smile, cheers
valda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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I did enjoy letting Eleanor have her way with these thugs. SPLAT! They so deserved it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The scene in the morgue was interesting. Hiding bricks of drugs in a dead body. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. The scene in the morgue was interesting. Hiding bricks of drugs in a dead body. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Forgive me for falling so far behind, but I did what to acknowledge your review and the time you took to read my stories. Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Wow, Eleanor is a tough cookie when she gets determined to stop a criminal or two! That's a funny scene when she starts throwing organs at them. I like how her unannounced entrances startle everyone. Good chapter. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Wow, Eleanor is a tough cookie when she gets determined to stop a criminal or two! That's a funny scene when she starts throwing organs at them. I like how her unannounced entrances startle everyone. Good chapter. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Forgive me for falling so far behind, but I did what to acknowledge your review and the time you took to read my stories. Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
Trouble at t' morgue...
Ok so it's supposed to be trouble at 't mill but we are a bit past the industrial revolution skits.
So it seems the coroner was bad in more ways than one.
Now they have a drug smuggling enterprise to tackle and that is obviously not tied to Zang.
My, my, Carol.
You are being a busy gal
Tim x
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Trouble at t' morgue...
Ok so it's supposed to be trouble at 't mill but we are a bit past the industrial revolution skits.
So it seems the coroner was bad in more ways than one.
Now they have a drug smuggling enterprise to tackle and that is obviously not tied to Zang.
My, my, Carol.
You are being a busy gal
Tim x
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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You didn't expect everything to go smoothly, now did you? Looks like the coroner had more than blood on his hands. (And Eleanor too!) LOL Thanks as always, Tim.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Rossi is celebrating a bit too soon, I suspect as there are bound to be people who want him dead. It was also a rough night in the coroner's office, and the coroner is dead next to a body that had been packed full of cocaine bricks. Drugs and money certainly make strange bedfellows.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Rossi is celebrating a bit too soon, I suspect as there are bound to be people who want him dead. It was also a rough night in the coroner's office, and the coroner is dead next to a body that had been packed full of cocaine bricks. Drugs and money certainly make strange bedfellows.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I just can't seem to get caught up with the thank yous but I did want to acknowledge your review and kindness for reading and enjoying my efforts. I apolozie for being so far behind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
We're at the final phase of the mystery, finding Zhang and Maggie and the person who publicized Donatelli's location and the fact that he is alive. Eleanor came in and did her part, sending human organs flying across the room. It was funny, but it helped Jack and Deluca capture the bad guys.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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We're at the final phase of the mystery, finding Zhang and Maggie and the person who publicized Donatelli's location and the fact that he is alive. Eleanor came in and did her part, sending human organs flying across the room. It was funny, but it helped Jack and Deluca capture the bad guys.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I just can't seem to get caught up with the thank yous but I did want to acknowledge your review and kindness for reading and enjoying my efforts. I apolozie for being so far behind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. It started out tense and a bit dramatic, but I enjoyed Eleanor's humour at the end. Who would have thought a kidney could be an effective weapon? Well done. Eleanor is a great character, no nonsense, but caring, determined, and fun, all in one "being".
Wendy
Edit: My bets on Rossi (bet's, short for "bet is")
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Lol. It started out tense and a bit dramatic, but I enjoyed Eleanor's humour at the end. Who would have thought a kidney could be an effective weapon? Well done. Eleanor is a great character, no nonsense, but caring, determined, and fun, all in one "being".
Wendy
Edit: My bets on Rossi (bet's, short for "bet is")
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Fixed and thanks!
I love Eleanor's humor as well and I believe we might have a generous portion of that in the next book... Yes, my brain has already been thinking ahead...LOl Thanks as always, Wendy.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another awesome chapter in this book. You had me rolling on the floor laughing so hard when she started throwing body parts at the criminal and smacking them in the face with a pancreas. That's funny shit I don't care who you are. LMFAO.
Great job Sis,
Cecilia
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Carol,
Another awesome chapter in this book. You had me rolling on the floor laughing so hard when she started throwing body parts at the criminal and smacking them in the face with a pancreas. That's funny shit I don't care who you are. LMFAO.
Great job Sis,
Cecilia
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Thanks, Sis...I love when I get get some humor tossed by Eleanor...She's a no-holes-barred kind of girl. She's the best. And of course, thank you for all your kindness.
Love ya, Carol
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Sis,
You work hard and I really enjoy this series. You deserve all the sixes I have. There never seems to be enough of them though:(
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You are too kind but I love it!
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You are the best my friend
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thank you! You are so kind and I really needed that today. Have a great evening.
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You do the same my friend.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I still see at least two stories here, maybe three. Oh well, you're the author. Thank you for sharing this with us. I am betting Eleanor will visit that guy who left with the drugs.
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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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I still see at least two stories here, maybe three. Oh well, you're the author. Thank you for sharing this with us. I am betting Eleanor will visit that guy who left with the drugs.
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Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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You're probably right, it could have been done differently. My problem is that I change the game plan as I go along so its kind of hard to back track when you've already got someone involved in one thing and another comes along. I simply love subplots, I guess. Thanks for the review and for reading.
Smiles, Carol
