Veil of Secrets
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10 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Another great read Carol finishing with Eleanor's visit to see Danni at his Casino. A ppignant moment between Eleanor and Charles who doesn't really get Eleanor's passion for helping. Love these characters, well done.
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Another great read Carol finishing with Eleanor's visit to see Danni at his Casino. A ppignant moment between Eleanor and Charles who doesn't really get Eleanor's passion for helping. Love these characters, well done.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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You bless me with six stars in a row...What an awesome gift. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. I wonder what Dannie will do to help Eleanor. So, I will keep reading. It is hard keeping up with you. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. I wonder what Dannie will do to help Eleanor. So, I will keep reading. It is hard keeping up with you. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Forgive me for falling so far behind, but I did what to acknowledge your review and the time you took to read my stories. Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another excellent chapter in your book. I could sit and read this whole book in a day. Do you have your other book in the series published, because I would like to read them all.
Well done my sister from another mister. Have a great day.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Carol,
Another excellent chapter in your book. I could sit and read this whole book in a day. Do you have your other book in the series published, because I would like to read them all.
Well done my sister from another mister. Have a great day.
Cecilia
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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I have them on FS...they haven't been published yet. The one following Unfinished Brushstrokes is Spirited Justice and then Miracles and this one I am writing now. Each one has the same main characters and the stories always move forward. You are so kind! Another six! I am blessed!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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It's cuz I love you and your stories are always fantastic
Comment from Wendy G
I sort of expected Charles to be more like her, passionate and driven to find the baby, rather than thinking it was too hard. Let's hope Danny can help in some way. Well written. Good that Matthew is starting to improve.
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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I sort of expected Charles to be more like her, passionate and driven to find the baby, rather than thinking it was too hard. Let's hope Danny can help in some way. Well written. Good that Matthew is starting to improve.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Unfortunately, Charles is like most whose lives have ended...he prefers to settle into paradise and embrace the gifts the Lord has given him. Eleanor, on the other hand, has the need to continue the work of helping those in need.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Charles doesn't have the same compulsion to solve problems as Eleanor. But she knows she can turn to Danny for help, and he has very good contacts. As far as the vineyard people, with Cornelius gone, life is good.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Charles doesn't have the same compulsion to solve problems as Eleanor. But she knows she can turn to Danny for help, and he has very good contacts. As far as the vineyard people, with Cornelius gone, life is good.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I just can't seem to get caught up with the thank yous but I did want to acknowledge your review and kindness for reading and enjoying my efforts. I apolozie for being so far behind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Poor Charles has been waiting a lifetime for Eleanor. The dialogue between Eleanor and Danny is interesting, and hopefully he will help find Maggie.
Your descriptions are well done. You always show us what's happening in each scene. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Poor Charles has been waiting a lifetime for Eleanor. The dialogue between Eleanor and Danny is interesting, and hopefully he will help find Maggie.
Your descriptions are well done. You always show us what's happening in each scene. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I just can't seem to get caught up with the thank yous but I did want to acknowledge your review and kindness for reading and enjoying my efforts. I apolozie for being so far behind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm glad Eleanor has someone she can call on to assist her fulfill all that is expected of her. I love the idea of a ghost character who can sense some supernatural things, but people around her don't understand her limited capabilities, and expect her to perform all sorts of magic tricks.
Eleanor is now well developed as a character and makes an incredible star of future detective investigations.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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I'm glad Eleanor has someone she can call on to assist her fulfill all that is expected of her. I love the idea of a ghost character who can sense some supernatural things, but people around her don't understand her limited capabilities, and expect her to perform all sorts of magic tricks.
Eleanor is now well developed as a character and makes an incredible star of future detective investigations.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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I love Eleanor...she's like my best friend or family member. Probably better than a family member — at least one of mine. I'm already thinking of the next one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Of course she does! Danny already knows that. Bless him. Eleanor has a way with people, she brings them together, she loves them, and they love her. Charles will have to get used to it, because I can't see Eleanor changing. (At least, I hope she doesn't) Everyone is happy, and they will be happier once Maggie is home and Jenna and Matthew are reunited again. If Zhang hurts that baby, there won't be a place in the whole universe he'll be able to hide. They will be after more than his blood! Well done again. I'm all caught up and it was wonderful! Love you lots, my friend. :)Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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Of course she does! Danny already knows that. Bless him. Eleanor has a way with people, she brings them together, she loves them, and they love her. Charles will have to get used to it, because I can't see Eleanor changing. (At least, I hope she doesn't) Everyone is happy, and they will be happier once Maggie is home and Jenna and Matthew are reunited again. If Zhang hurts that baby, there won't be a place in the whole universe he'll be able to hide. They will be after more than his blood! Well done again. I'm all caught up and it was wonderful! Love you lots, my friend. :)Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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I could never change Eleanor... she's at her finest in the next chapter... just a bit of humor added. And then we have to start digging deep to find little Maggie. Zhang's a nasty guy and one never knows what he did with her.
Smiles and hugs and lots of love, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this addition to the story with us. I am enjoying the read.
Lenore smiled, "I'm your Grammy, and Miriam says she is too." (Interesting revelation. I knew Amelia claimed Lenore as her grandma by default, now we find out Miriam is a real grandma????)
Eleanor nodded. "Yes," Eleanor nodded, "and Cornelius is in the right place. He won't harm anyone again." (too many 'Eleanor nodded.')
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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Thank you for sharing this addition to the story with us. I am enjoying the read.
Lenore smiled, "I'm your Grammy, and Miriam says she is too." (Interesting revelation. I knew Amelia claimed Lenore as her grandma by default, now we find out Miriam is a real grandma????)
Eleanor nodded. "Yes," Eleanor nodded, "and Cornelius is in the right place. He won't harm anyone again." (too many 'Eleanor nodded.')
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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Thanks for catching my error. I added "Yes" to be the beginning and forgot to remove the first Eleanor nodded. My brain is in an uproar.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
So now, Matthew is on the mend, just the final couple of pieces to put in place.
I am wondering, Carol, if when all is said and done, Eleanor will finally head to England, or maybe even pass on to the other place.
Not long till I find out.
Tim x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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So now, Matthew is on the mend, just the final couple of pieces to put in place.
I am wondering, Carol, if when all is said and done, Eleanor will finally head to England, or maybe even pass on to the other place.
Not long till I find out.
Tim x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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I am seriously thinking of Eleanor's next adventure be in England... maybe a haunted castle. Remember Danny (who was involved in solving the theft of Eleanor's painting a few stories back) has just returned from England... Hmm! Maybe a wedding for one of our couples and mystery, humor and hauntings galore.
What you think?
Smiles, Carol
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Well England certainly has plenty of haunted places, and I can see her wandering the halls of many such.
Tim x
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We still have to catch Zhang (maybe) and find Maggie. And was the coroner in on this alone or does this judge have something to do with it? So many options and questions.
