Veil of Secrets
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Veil of Secrets - Chap 43"Mystery/Crime and Ghosts
15 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A great scene as Miriam puts her cross to the inside of the mirror and Lenore matches it from the outside freeing Miriam. Well done with this chapter, Carol with as lovely cook-in finishing it off as Garth and Rebecca find each others fingers.
cheers'
valda
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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A great scene as Miriam puts her cross to the inside of the mirror and Lenore matches it from the outside freeing Miriam. Well done with this chapter, Carol with as lovely cook-in finishing it off as Garth and Rebecca find each others fingers.
cheers'
valda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2025
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Four chapters in a row, Valda. I am so flattered and happy that you enjoyed the story. I apologize that I am always so far behind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. This chapter has a sense that it is the end of the story. It will be interesting to see what comes next. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. This chapter has a sense that it is the end of the story. It will be interesting to see what comes next. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I just can't seem to get caught up with the thank yous but I did want to acknowledge your review and kindness for reading and enjoying my efforts. I apolozie for being so far behind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Wow, this chapter sure was action packed. I am so glad everybody was together enjoying a great meal. It's too bad that Jenna, Matt, and the baby weren't there. Maybe now Cornelius is dead for good they will be able to find Maggie.
Well done sister,
Cecilia
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Carol,
Wow, this chapter sure was action packed. I am so glad everybody was together enjoying a great meal. It's too bad that Jenna, Matt, and the baby weren't there. Maybe now Cornelius is dead for good they will be able to find Maggie.
Well done sister,
Cecilia
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Oh, sister, you flatter me so much and I am definitely blessed by your kindness. Thankyou as always for reading, enjoying and for the stars.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You're welcome my dear friend.
Comment from Carol Clark2
We have most of the cast together for a lovely dinner. We're still missing Jenna and Maggie, and of course Donatelli. The playfulness between Miriam and Antonio makes a fun scene. I'm glad Cornelius is now out of the picture. Looking forward to the rest of the rescues. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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We have most of the cast together for a lovely dinner. We're still missing Jenna and Maggie, and of course Donatelli. The playfulness between Miriam and Antonio makes a fun scene. I'm glad Cornelius is now out of the picture. Looking forward to the rest of the rescues. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thanks so much, Carol for continuing and sticking with the story. I appreciate your kindness and review very much.
Smiles, Carol
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My pleasure. Great book!
Comment from Tim Margetts
We are getting close, I can almost smell the happy ever after, Carol.
I am so glad you managed to get that A-hole trapped by his own evil magic's. Justice done.
And now Miriam is also free, Just need to fix Matthew and find Maggie and if we are lucky, kill Zang.
Tim x
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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We are getting close, I can almost smell the happy ever after, Carol.
I am so glad you managed to get that A-hole trapped by his own evil magic's. Justice done.
And now Miriam is also free, Just need to fix Matthew and find Maggie and if we are lucky, kill Zang.
Tim x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much for enjoying another chapter of this wild ride.... we are moving a little closer toward that happily ever after. I'd write the next chapter faster but my hand is still stinging from the virtual slap. LOL
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Amazingly beautiful!! Cornelius has at last been vanquished into his own hell he'd put Miriam in. Good!!! Everyone is safe and now can look to the future. Rebecca and Garth are now properly together. This was good news all round. Except.... We have to find Zhang and get Maggie back. Perhaps you can find a way of trapping him in the morror!! Lol. No resting on you laurals, Carol, you still have a lot of work to do. Danni and Matthew are depending on you! I can't wait for the next part. Well done, my extremely clever author! Love you lots. Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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Amazingly beautiful!! Cornelius has at last been vanquished into his own hell he'd put Miriam in. Good!!! Everyone is safe and now can look to the future. Rebecca and Garth are now properly together. This was good news all round. Except.... We have to find Zhang and get Maggie back. Perhaps you can find a way of trapping him in the morror!! Lol. No resting on you laurals, Carol, you still have a lot of work to do. Danni and Matthew are depending on you! I can't wait for the next part. Well done, my extremely clever author! Love you lots. Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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I hope banishing hi to the mirror will suffice since I had no idea how to do away with a ghost without having a seance or something. If it was only that easy to stop Zhang.
Smiles and love, Carol
Comment from karenina
What a chapter! The crosses "touching" on either side of the mirror is a brilliant scene! I know there are others to be dealt with, but this was everything I could ask for!
Karenina
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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What a chapter! The crosses "touching" on either side of the mirror is a brilliant scene! I know there are others to be dealt with, but this was everything I could ask for!
Karenina
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2025
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Hurrah! I am happy that you enjoyed this chapter...needed to do away with Cornelius but I haven't had any experiences with seances or other ghost destoying tactics so I locked him up and threw away the key.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
After Miriam is rescued from the mirror, they all come together to celebrate being with each other for a full-fledged Italian feast. Rebecca finally feels a part of all these people and is truly happy.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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After Miriam is rescued from the mirror, they all come together to celebrate being with each other for a full-fledged Italian feast. Rebecca finally feels a part of all these people and is truly happy.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I just can't seem to get caught up with the thank yous but I did want to acknowledge your review and kindness for reading and enjoying my efforts. I apolozie for being so far behind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely to have a chapter filled with relief, joy and happiness, even if it's only temporary. For there are still others to be found and rescued, there are other evil characters to receive due justice. Keep it coming, Carol. We can't rest either until it's all solved.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Lovely to have a chapter filled with relief, joy and happiness, even if it's only temporary. For there are still others to be found and rescued, there are other evil characters to receive due justice. Keep it coming, Carol. We can't rest either until it's all solved.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Thank you for taking your time to read and review my stories. I wish there was more time in the day to do all the things necessary to keep up, but I get slower by the day. I am sorry this is so late, but I do appreciate your time and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Aaaah! I love the way you pulled everything and everyone together. After 43 chapters, I know Miriam was glad to be out of that mirror. I enjoyed the description of the mirror cracking open and a force sucking Cornelius into it. I also enjoyed reading the list of characters seated around the table enjoying a meal. This was a very pleasant read. However, there is much more to be resolved with Zhang out there somewhere, and Maggie gone.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Aaaah! I love the way you pulled everything and everyone together. After 43 chapters, I know Miriam was glad to be out of that mirror. I enjoyed the description of the mirror cracking open and a force sucking Cornelius into it. I also enjoyed reading the list of characters seated around the table enjoying a meal. This was a very pleasant read. However, there is much more to be resolved with Zhang out there somewhere, and Maggie gone.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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Thank you for taking your time to read and review my stories. I wish there was more time in the day to do all the things necessary to keep up, but I get slower by the day. I am sorry this is so late, but I do appreciate your time and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
