Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Off The Record"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
as you can see, I'm way behind in reviewing, so I'm being selective about what I read so I can try to catch up. A fart in an elevator? Ha, ha, ha, I've never heard that one. I'll stash it in my brain and hope I can remember it. That's funny gal. Those two ladies are nothing but trouble, but they sure liven up a story. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Hello Gretchen,
as you can see, I'm way behind in reviewing, so I'm being selective about what I read so I can try to catch up. A fart in an elevator? Ha, ha, ha, I've never heard that one. I'll stash it in my brain and hope I can remember it. That's funny gal. Those two ladies are nothing but trouble, but they sure liven up a story. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Alice and Brenda are quite the pair. I have fun writing about them. Thank you for this wonderful review and the extra star. Thank you for trying to keep up with my novel. Very appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. It holds a person in suspense, listening to the moving of the story and your sentence and structure in your paragraphing are all very well done. Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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This is very well written, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud. It holds a person in suspense, listening to the moving of the story and your sentence and structure in your paragraphing are all very well done. Patricia
Comment Written 21-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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thank you so much, Patricia. I appreciate the wonderful review and the nice comments. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Miranda has a come-to-Jesus minute with Brenda and Alice, but it doesn't seem she quite got her point across with Alice. She does, however, have Mitch's devotion and heart.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Miranda has a come-to-Jesus minute with Brenda and Alice, but it doesn't seem she quite got her point across with Alice. She does, however, have Mitch's devotion and heart.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Alice is a hardened old woman. I think Miranda sees the potential to become her and that scares her. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Another wonderful chapter with Miranda's life.
I'm glad Dougie is awake and I hope he recovers his memory.
Alice and Brenda are a handful and Miranda is not going to let her get away with it.
A couple of things to check....
"Mitch holds the door open.......grab a cruller and go wait (be) the car."
*by?
Brenda dabs at........She (leave ) with a slight smirk on her lips." *leaves?
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Another wonderful chapter with Miranda's life.
I'm glad Dougie is awake and I hope he recovers his memory.
Alice and Brenda are a handful and Miranda is not going to let her get away with it.
A couple of things to check....
"Mitch holds the door open.......grab a cruller and go wait (be) the car."
*by?
Brenda dabs at........She (leave ) with a slight smirk on her lips." *leaves?
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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thank you so much, Gypsy. I appreciate the nice comments and feedback. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
It is good to know Dougie is awake. I hope he'll get his memory back. I think Alice and Brenda are a funny pair of ladies who are always going to be a problem wherever they go but Miranda isn't about to let them get away with anything,
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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It is good to know Dougie is awake. I hope he'll get his memory back. I think Alice and Brenda are a funny pair of ladies who are always going to be a problem wherever they go but Miranda isn't about to let them get away with anything,
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much, Beth. I appreciate this very nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry
Not much movement, but Miranda gave notice. Mitchell needs to up his game. Put up or shut up. Waylon could use a stand up stepdad. 12% cloudy. I haven't been outside in days. karen
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Not much movement, but Miranda gave notice. Mitchell needs to up his game. Put up or shut up. Waylon could use a stand up stepdad. 12% cloudy. I haven't been outside in days. karen
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Thank you, Karen. Hope the weather gets better for you. Gretchen
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Cold is not my friend. But I am okay Karen
Comment from Sankey
This was a great read. Full of some twists and turns and quite realistic Slight error...looking.go wait b[e](y) the car.
Loved this..."fart in an elevator"
Another light miss. She leave(s) with
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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This was a great read. Full of some twists and turns and quite realistic Slight error...looking.go wait b[e](y) the car.
Loved this..."fart in an elevator"
Another light miss. She leave(s) with
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much. There isn't much quicker than a fart in an elevator. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Alice and Brenda - funny but not funny in their attitudes, and Miranda understands them and their antics pretty well. Meanwhile I hope Dougie can remember something helpful about his attack, and the people involved, so he can defend himself from murder charges.
Wendy
She leave (leaves) with a slight smirk on her lips.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Alice and Brenda - funny but not funny in their attitudes, and Miranda understands them and their antics pretty well. Meanwhile I hope Dougie can remember something helpful about his attack, and the people involved, so he can defend himself from murder charges.
Wendy
She leave (leaves) with a slight smirk on her lips.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much. Alice and Brenda are trouble in support hose. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very well written.
You have us wondering every week whether or when Dougie will remember all.
At least Miranda is working (smiley face here) She's been skipping out of work so much.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Very well written.
You have us wondering every week whether or when Dougie will remember all.
At least Miranda is working (smiley face here) She's been skipping out of work so much.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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She does lose a lot of time. Lol. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Some great repartee here. Always fun when Miranda's in her element. I particularly liked: "He'd give you the shirt off his back if you asked him to" (Well the girls certainly tried that approach:)) Poor Mitch! He is Mr Binary Man but he needs to be with Miranda's dubious respect for the law!
Small edit: Brenda tosses her handful of candy on the counter and Alice... (mybe not repeat 'on the counter again'? Alice plunks her cheap wine down too?
"I'm going to grab a culler and go wait (in) the car."
Thank you, Gretchen, for sharing this, as ever, amusing and engaging chapter. Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Some great repartee here. Always fun when Miranda's in her element. I particularly liked: "He'd give you the shirt off his back if you asked him to" (Well the girls certainly tried that approach:)) Poor Mitch! He is Mr Binary Man but he needs to be with Miranda's dubious respect for the law!
Small edit: Brenda tosses her handful of candy on the counter and Alice... (mybe not repeat 'on the counter again'? Alice plunks her cheap wine down too?
"I'm going to grab a culler and go wait (in) the car."
Thank you, Gretchen, for sharing this, as ever, amusing and engaging chapter. Debbie
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2025
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Thank you, Debbie. Thank you for the nice words and the edits. Gretchen
