Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Law Abiding Citizens"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
As Miranda reads about Rev. Foley's camp it morphs from a good place young adults into a gulag for those with gay leanings. Then Mitch shows up at the store and asks her to come help Aaron. What has Aaron gotten himself into now?
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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As Miranda reads about Rev. Foley's camp it morphs from a good place young adults into a gulag for those with gay leanings. Then Mitch shows up at the store and asks her to come help Aaron. What has Aaron gotten himself into now?
Comment Written 19-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hi Gretchen,
I'm not quite sure what to make of Tomlin being in the church camp for gay kids. Is he the one speaking in the caption or is it someone else?
Oh my, those two horny old gals are bound to create a scene wherever they go. This was hilarious.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Hi Gretchen,
I'm not quite sure what to make of Tomlin being in the church camp for gay kids. Is he the one speaking in the caption or is it someone else?
Oh my, those two horny old gals are bound to create a scene wherever they go. This was hilarious.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 18-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much, Tom. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I do have a suggestion for you Gretchen for your posts. It would be useful to have a list of your characters and the part they play in your story. Just to remind me. I am not sure who Brenda and Alice are? Perhaps I have missed some of your posts Gretchen. Was Aaron working as a decorator for these people? Sorry, but I seem to have lost the thread of your story here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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I do have a suggestion for you Gretchen for your posts. It would be useful to have a list of your characters and the part they play in your story. Just to remind me. I am not sure who Brenda and Alice are? Perhaps I have missed some of your posts Gretchen. Was Aaron working as a decorator for these people? Sorry, but I seem to have lost the thread of your story here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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I forgot to do your suggestions. I will try to get on it. Gretchen Thank you for the review and the suggestion.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter pulls me right in! Miranda's curiosity make her a fantastic character. The tension builds so smoothly as she digs deeper into The Narrows. That twist with Aaron had me cracking up! And Brenda and Alice at the end? I did not see that coming! I'm loving where this is going -
can't wait to see what happens next!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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This chapter pulls me right in! Miranda's curiosity make her a fantastic character. The tension builds so smoothly as she digs deeper into The Narrows. That twist with Aaron had me cracking up! And Brenda and Alice at the end? I did not see that coming! I'm loving where this is going -
can't wait to see what happens next!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Neonewman
Camp Narrows needs to be investigated. It sounds like torture to me. I love that you ended with Brenda and Alice, the alcohol thieves, lol. This is another great addition. Your story is progressing nicely.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Camp Narrows needs to be investigated. It sounds like torture to me. I love that you ended with Brenda and Alice, the alcohol thieves, lol. This is another great addition. Your story is progressing nicely.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much, Steve. I appreciate this . Gretchen
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My pleasure, Gretchen.
Comment from Sankey
Ha! Brenda and Alice, the shoplifters, hey! This was another interesting progression. I look forward to more of this exciting stuff as we continue, well done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Ha! Brenda and Alice, the shoplifters, hey! This was another interesting progression. I look forward to more of this exciting stuff as we continue, well done.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Jim Wile
I enjoyed the descriptions Miranda read about for Camp Narrows. Sounds like an awful place and a big clue about the murder of Tomlin. I also liked the way you ended this chapter with a little comic relief from our old friends Brenda and Alice.
If the Miranda Chronicles were ever to be made into a movie or series, I think Linda Cardellini would make a great Miranda.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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I enjoyed the descriptions Miranda read about for Camp Narrows. Sounds like an awful place and a big clue about the murder of Tomlin. I also liked the way you ended this chapter with a little comic relief from our old friends Brenda and Alice.
If the Miranda Chronicles were ever to be made into a movie or series, I think Linda Cardellini would make a great Miranda.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Lol. My daughter calls me Linda Cardinelli. Too funny. Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Sanku
Brenda and Alice are the two oldies who tried to sneak bottles of wine or beer from Miranda;s place? I am not sure if you intended it but they asking Aaron to get naked was funny! The Narrows hides a lot so miranda is going to dig more,I am sure..
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Brenda and Alice are the two oldies who tried to sneak bottles of wine or beer from Miranda;s place? I am not sure if you intended it but they asking Aaron to get naked was funny! The Narrows hides a lot so miranda is going to dig more,I am sure..
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Yes, you are correct. I thought Alice and Brenda might lighten things up. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It gives me some hope that two little old ladies still have the desire to have a male stripper, but at the same time, I'd hate to think of myself drooling over a naked lad! LOL Those two 'sweet' ladies have taken another step up from shoplifting! That is hilarious! But how did Aaron get knocked about? Did he have to fight them off?? Oh, I'm splitting mysids with laughter. 😂 Bless his heart.
Now, thee Narrows, beating the gay out of a lad? A church? Doesn't surprise me, there are a load of sadists in them. But it does make sense that Mira Evanoff is involved and makes me believe she murdered Tomlin if she found out that he messed around with her son. Lots happening in this chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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It gives me some hope that two little old ladies still have the desire to have a male stripper, but at the same time, I'd hate to think of myself drooling over a naked lad! LOL Those two 'sweet' ladies have taken another step up from shoplifting! That is hilarious! But how did Aaron get knocked about? Did he have to fight them off?? Oh, I'm splitting mysids with laughter. 😂 Bless his heart.
Now, thee Narrows, beating the gay out of a lad? A church? Doesn't surprise me, there are a load of sadists in them. But it does make sense that Mira Evanoff is involved and makes me believe she murdered Tomlin if she found out that he messed around with her son. Lots happening in this chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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There is a lot more than we think going on with Tomlins murder. Thank you so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
So what exactly is/was Tomlin's role at the Narrows? Something weird going on between him and the church. And now these two crazy old bats have beaten up Aaron? Wow, there's both tension and humour here. But somehow these two oldies are going to be involved with solving a murder. I have no idea where you are going, so - very well done. Keeping me in suspense!
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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So what exactly is/was Tomlin's role at the Narrows? Something weird going on between him and the church. And now these two crazy old bats have beaten up Aaron? Wow, there's both tension and humour here. But somehow these two oldies are going to be involved with solving a murder. I have no idea where you are going, so - very well done. Keeping me in suspense!
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thank you, Wendy. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thanks for the idea filled feedback. Gretchen
