Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

There is so much tension here which I really like. The dialogue between all of your characters flows really naturally and I love how Eleanor takes command. I'm off to read the next chapter now.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025

I think it is impossible to get caught up with my thank yous when I fall so far behind. I do appreciate every time you read and respond and I am sorry for falling so far behind. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

At last Garth is on hisxway to find Rebecca with wolfdog's help. A lovely scene as Allie visits to help the introduction. Another great chapter read, Carol.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025

I think it is impossible to get caught up with my thank yous when I fall so far behind. I do appreciate every time you read and respond and I am sorry for falling so far behind. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from eliz100

Excellent

This is another excellent chapter. The action and the suspense continue.I look forward to the next chapter. II do not see any room for improvement, Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2025

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

I like the interaction between the wolf and Garth. Cautions is necessary as this was one eventful night. I hope he'll find Rebecca before Zhang does. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2025

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

Travis tries really hard to let Eleanor know where Rebecca is, but his mother doesn't believe him and tries to stop him. Allie tells Garth he needs to make friends with the wolfdog and he finds himself sharing a steak with the animal. At least a few things are going well.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2025

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Great chapter -- as they all are. I love that Garth (ALPHA male extraordinaire) has come to realize he must trust the wolf dog (ALPHA dog extraordinaire)--

I'm a softie. That Allie is appearing to help guide Garth to Rebecca makes me smile as I rush off to read the next chapter!

Karenina

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2025

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This amazing wolf dog, where did it come from with all the wisdom of the ages on and in its perception and presence will lead Garth to his beloved and will help solve the present dilemma that they're in. Well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2025

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Carol,

Your head must be spinning in circles trying to keep your story line straight. You are a very talented woman and it shows. This is a great addition to your book. I'm so far behind, but I chose to read your story first, because I love it.

Have a great day my friend.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2025

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

I'm glad Travis is able to talk, and is giving the women helpful information. The differences in reaction to Travis from Eleanor and Althea are interesting. A fun turn of events, that Garth is following the wolf-dog, hoping he finds Rebecca. Good chapter. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2025

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025

Thanks so much, Carol. Althea's been hysterical from the beginning and blames herself that he was missing. Eleanor has had everything dumped on her and she's just trying to maintain. As for the dog, I am sure Garth can't believe he's ltetting a dog take the lead.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I can understand Garth's impatience, and so many impossible situations with people from previous lives, plus a wolf-dog. I am glad he has decided to trust the dog. And Travis has been helpful - Althea is protective, and understandably, but doesn't realise the urgency of the situation for the others. Another fine chapter.Wendy

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2025