No - Say It Ain't So!
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Aha, we finally got hold of the president in the switched body. I laughed reading this: "t every intersection, he looked left and right for evidence of civilization. Though he wasn't tired, he was famished. Finally, he saw a McDonald's restaurant. He was sorry that he had money only sufficient for a Big Mac meal, despite that it filled him to discomfort, he would have purchased another had he the PIN to the debit card.
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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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Aha, we finally got hold of the president in the switched body. I laughed reading this: "t every intersection, he looked left and right for evidence of civilization. Though he wasn't tired, he was famished. Finally, he saw a McDonald's restaurant. He was sorry that he had money only sufficient for a Big Mac meal, despite that it filled him to discomfort, he would have purchased another had he the PIN to the debit card.
". Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2025
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Thank you. This was a blast writing. I wanted to stay in that world.
Comment from lyenochka
I am enjoying your creativity here, Wayne! Thanks for helping us dream / daydream of a better world with sane leaders.
Call Melana. (Melania) I had to chuckle that his first impulse was to ask them to call Ivanka, to whom he's much more attached than to his wife.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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I am enjoying your creativity here, Wayne! Thanks for helping us dream / daydream of a better world with sane leaders.
Call Melana. (Melania) I had to chuckle that his first impulse was to ask them to call Ivanka, to whom he's much more attached than to his wife.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much. Throughout the writing I felt myself living in my alternate universe, greatly saddened to look up and see that it was fiction.
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. I had wondered how Trump was coping with being ordinary, and here it is. You've made his reactions and thoughts very real, and I have to admit to laughing at his discomfort and about his relationships with everyone he meets. Very imaginative!!!
Wendy
Edits: distaining (disdaining), demeaner (demeanor, in American English, demeanour in Australian English),Call Melana (Melania)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Lol. I had wondered how Trump was coping with being ordinary, and here it is. You've made his reactions and thoughts very real, and I have to admit to laughing at his discomfort and about his relationships with everyone he meets. Very imaginative!!!
Wendy
Edits: distaining (disdaining), demeaner (demeanor, in American English, demeanour in Australian English),Call Melana (Melania)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2025
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Thank you for your great review. Your catches are embarrassing. I guess I was just too taken in by the fiction.
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It happens…. Don’t worry.
Comment from jim vecchio
The story gets interestinger and interestinger. Glad to see this installment concentrating on Phil Jansen's side of the story. Reminds me of the time I got trapped in Henny Youngman's body during a benefit. I got onstsage and my jokes were so bad, everyone thought I really was him!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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The story gets interestinger and interestinger. Glad to see this installment concentrating on Phil Jansen's side of the story. Reminds me of the time I got trapped in Henny Youngman's body during a benefit. I got onstsage and my jokes were so bad, everyone thought I really was him!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Hilarious!
Thank you for the fun review!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, your story is such a wild ride! I love how you captured the confusion and frustration of waking up in someone else's body. Trump's reactions had me hooked from the start. The little details like his disdain for generic snacks was so funny. The interaction with the police was hilarious and a little tense - I could really feel his growing panic. I can't wait to see what happens next!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Wow, your story is such a wild ride! I love how you captured the confusion and frustration of waking up in someone else's body. Trump's reactions had me hooked from the start. The little details like his disdain for generic snacks was so funny. The interaction with the police was hilarious and a little tense - I could really feel his growing panic. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you. This was so much fun to write that at the end of each writing episode, I look at the news and want to jump right back in!
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
A different perspective; very funny. We do what we can to survive these times and writing surely helps. I enjoyed the details and descriptions. The toothbrush detail and his eating were well written. Gee, why wouldn't Melania pay I wonder. Ha Ha
Thank you for the laughs,
Alex
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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A different perspective; very funny. We do what we can to survive these times and writing surely helps. I enjoyed the details and descriptions. The toothbrush detail and his eating were well written. Gee, why wouldn't Melania pay I wonder. Ha Ha
Thank you for the laughs,
Alex
Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you for your great review and for the six stars!
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You're welcome! (Smiley face)
Comment from Karen Cherry
This is well thought out. It could so easily turn into utter crap on toast. Do you have plot lines and all that stuff? I just sit down and write until I am done, or my behind goes totally numb. Good writing honeybunch. Karen
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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This is well thought out. It could so easily turn into utter crap on toast. Do you have plot lines and all that stuff? I just sit down and write until I am done, or my behind goes totally numb. Good writing honeybunch. Karen
Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you immensely for the six stars!
I had most of it in my head, but 2/3 of the way through I made some notes just to make sure that the writing didn't control what was written. Sometimes characters think they are in charge.
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You mean they aren't ????
Comment from themarfbard_michael
Wow, I am just reading this for the first time and I find it very original very unique and hilarious
Great imagery, descriptive detail, and dialogue
I got a chuckle right away and was hooked by your recap of the last chapter I would love to see something like this published if you ever get around to it keep up the great writing
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Wow, I am just reading this for the first time and I find it very original very unique and hilarious
Great imagery, descriptive detail, and dialogue
I got a chuckle right away and was hooked by your recap of the last chapter I would love to see something like this published if you ever get around to it keep up the great writing
Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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I would love for it to be published - even if my pants were sued off my butt and I spent the rest of my days in the calaboose.
Thank you immensely for the great review and for the six stars!
