Veil of Secrets
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15 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
The intensity increases. You did another brilliant job with this chapter, Carol. I particularly liked the scene with Donatelli and I could feel his pain and anger. I'm looking forward to catching up on the next chapter.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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The intensity increases. You did another brilliant job with this chapter, Carol. I particularly liked the scene with Donatelli and I could feel his pain and anger. I'm looking forward to catching up on the next chapter.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2025
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I think it is impossible to get caught up with my thank yous when I fall so far behind. I do appreciate every time you read and respond and I am sorry for falling so far behind. Thank you.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Plenty of drama and even more stress now for Donatelli and Jenna with their little Maggie (I love that name) gone. Well written carol, you certainly had me holding my breath. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Plenty of drama and even more stress now for Donatelli and Jenna with their little Maggie (I love that name) gone. Well written carol, you certainly had me holding my breath. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 20-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2025
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Thank you for always supporting me and taking the time to enjoy my posts. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. Interestingly, Zhang was shot and planning an escape and looking forward to seeing what happens to Maggie. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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This is another excellent chapter. Interestingly, Zhang was shot and planning an escape and looking forward to seeing what happens to Maggie. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oh. my God, you packed so much action in this chapter... attacks of three fronts and kidnaping and attentat on a injured cop. I cannot wait to see what's next.
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Oh. my God, you packed so much action in this chapter... attacks of three fronts and kidnaping and attentat on a injured cop. I cannot wait to see what's next.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
You wrapped up more violence, anguish, and despair in one chapter than I thought possible. And the writing was clear enough that I could see every action occurring in the tragic incidents.
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You wrapped up more violence, anguish, and despair in one chapter than I thought possible. And the writing was clear enough that I could see every action occurring in the tragic incidents.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Wow!!! You have a whole lot going on in this chapter and don't ya know law enforcement missed both opportuinities by mere seconds. This is action packed and it is holding this audience captive. The only reason I'm putting it down is because I don't have anymore chapter :(
I took a couple days off and now I have 90 messages. I don't think I will ever get caught up at this :(. Have a good night
Cecilia
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Carol,
Wow!!! You have a whole lot going on in this chapter and don't ya know law enforcement missed both opportuinities by mere seconds. This is action packed and it is holding this audience captive. The only reason I'm putting it down is because I don't have anymore chapter :(
I took a couple days off and now I have 90 messages. I don't think I will ever get caught up at this :(. Have a good night
Cecilia
Comment Written 17-Feb-2025
Comment from Wendy G
I don't have time to rate this as I must move on quickly to the next chapter. Lol.
What a disaster is unfolding, as it seems Zhang has people everywhere, and at present they are getting away with their evil plans.
Sorry , Have to go and read the next one. Wendy
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I don't have time to rate this as I must move on quickly to the next chapter. Lol.
What a disaster is unfolding, as it seems Zhang has people everywhere, and at present they are getting away with their evil plans.
Sorry , Have to go and read the next one. Wendy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm exhausted and out of breath from all the action and gun shots. So many things are happening all at once, and happening quickly. Ashley is lost in the water, Zhang has disappeared, Maggie has been kidnapped, Donatelli is lying, bleeding in the hallway, Travis is unconscious, and Rebecca is hanging on for dear life.
Your brain must be swirling. Your descriptions are still exceptional.
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I'm exhausted and out of breath from all the action and gun shots. So many things are happening all at once, and happening quickly. Ashley is lost in the water, Zhang has disappeared, Maggie has been kidnapped, Donatelli is lying, bleeding in the hallway, Travis is unconscious, and Rebecca is hanging on for dear life.
Your brain must be swirling. Your descriptions are still exceptional.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
Comment from royowen
What an exciting episode, with pitch battles going on, it appears the baby has been kidnapped, and a wounded Zhang, although wounded has escaped, what a battle, all the major gangsters, FBI and now the coast guard involved in all out war. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
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What an exciting episode, with pitch battles going on, it appears the baby has been kidnapped, and a wounded Zhang, although wounded has escaped, what a battle, all the major gangsters, FBI and now the coast guard involved in all out war. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
Comment from karenina
As if there wasn't enough action, danger, and desperation- now they have Maggie! Oh, Good Gravy Marie! I could barely slow down my reading as I careened through gunshots, kidnappings, women being pulled from cages and that dastardly Zhang making it off the boat -- (although I hope his escape is only temporary)--
I think you need to put a publisher on retainer, Carol. This IS meant to be an entire series of "Eleanor Adventures!"
Whew!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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As if there wasn't enough action, danger, and desperation- now they have Maggie! Oh, Good Gravy Marie! I could barely slow down my reading as I careened through gunshots, kidnappings, women being pulled from cages and that dastardly Zhang making it off the boat -- (although I hope his escape is only temporary)--
I think you need to put a publisher on retainer, Carol. This IS meant to be an entire series of "Eleanor Adventures!"
Whew!
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Wouldn't that be aawesome!!!!I would simply love to see someone in the publishing field to think it was worth taking alook at but I wouldn't know where to start and it probably costs a lot. But I do love the series.
smiles, Carol
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Redfield self-published "The Celestine Prophecy". -- (smile)
He did pretty good for himself!
Don't stop believing!
