Veil of Secrets
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Comment from Jacob1395
I could really feel the loyalty there was between Travis and the wolf-dog. This was done really well and I could feel the tension as they were being attacked. I got the sense that Travis would do anything to protect his dog. Another excellent chapter, Carol, I'm off to catch up on the next one. I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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I could really feel the loyalty there was between Travis and the wolf-dog. This was done really well and I could feel the tension as they were being attacked. I got the sense that Travis would do anything to protect his dog. Another excellent chapter, Carol, I'm off to catch up on the next one. I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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I love the wolf-dog... He might have been wild at one point, but his heart is gold. And I believe Travis has learned that too.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wy Jung
Oh man. I should go to bed, but I'm hooked again with just a few chapters to go. What did people do when they were reading it as you were writing it and had to wait for the next chapter???! I'm so glad I can just keep clicking through. !
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Oh man. I should go to bed, but I'm hooked again with just a few chapters to go. What did people do when they were reading it as you were writing it and had to wait for the next chapter???! I'm so glad I can just keep clicking through. !
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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I'm one of the few writers that posts a chapter a day. Most only post once a week. I would go bonkers waiting for the next one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. It was good the wolf-dog was with Travis. Your word descriptions are compelling. The coyotes made me nervous. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. It was good the wolf-dog was with Travis. Your word descriptions are compelling. The coyotes made me nervous. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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Yes, the wolf-dog has saved Travis several itimes and will be another important part in the story. Hope you are enjoying it. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
It's so good to see Travis out of danger, Cornelius actually helping him as far as the dogs are concerned, and he puts healing powder on the dog, after defending Travis, and simply walks away, beautifully written Carol, blessings, trying to catch up, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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It's so good to see Travis out of danger, Cornelius actually helping him as far as the dogs are concerned, and he puts healing powder on the dog, after defending Travis, and simply walks away, beautifully written Carol, blessings, trying to catch up, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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Yes, Cornelius had a weak moment...maybe things are working on him about family and legacies. He wouldn't let him self appear weak though so he helped and then walked away.
Smiles, Carol
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I think so
Comment from karenina
Another fine chapter! Tension galore with your descriptive attack of the coyotes!
"his voice was like wind through dead leaves..."
My favorite line!
This is by far the most intricate plotline you've had in the "Eleanor" series...
Zhang and his ilk are still to be declined with but I love where you are right now!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Another fine chapter! Tension galore with your descriptive attack of the coyotes!
"his voice was like wind through dead leaves..."
My favorite line!
This is by far the most intricate plotline you've had in the "Eleanor" series...
Zhang and his ilk are still to be declined with but I love where you are right now!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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It is and actually it wasn't meant to get to thick but the story owned it's self... I think the next one needs to be Eleanor and humor again...This got a little dark and heavy.
Smiles, Carol
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It has been "darker" -- but thus far you've pulled the nose of the plane up and not crashed... Eleanor's inability to be all "ghosts" to all people has really come through! Sort of a subliminal message there maybe? This has been intense with "adventure" -- but yes, I love it and still wouldn't mind a lighter plot for the next Eleanor adventure...
(smile--I love psychological thrillers and such but maybe it's me? I'm ready for a Rom-Com!)
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I believe the next one will be a wedding in England in a castle ...maybe a haunted one. Lots of humor I hope and a mystery of course...but I have no idea what... Maybe the Queen or King would be kidnapped? LOL
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Oh! That sounds exciting! I'll brainstorm mysteries and send them to you unsolicited. (Laughing here)
You're free to delete them as I send them!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
That poor kid has had a terrible night and needs medical attention. If Garth would only trust the wolf-dog, he could lead him to Rebecca. The problem is, he still isn't placing any confidence in the ghost people.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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That poor kid has had a terrible night and needs medical attention. If Garth would only trust the wolf-dog, he could lead him to Rebecca. The problem is, he still isn't placing any confidence in the ghost people.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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He's a play by the book man and ghosts don't fit in although he's willing to easily talk to Allie and Eleanor. One of these days, he might finally understand.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Loved the interaction with Travis and the wolf-dog, fighting off the coyotes, going for help. Another good chapter, Carol. You show Garth's fr4ustration well, and it is understandable as he's probably imagining all that Rebecca could be going through. Well done,
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Loved the interaction with Travis and the wolf-dog, fighting off the coyotes, going for help. Another good chapter, Carol. You show Garth's fr4ustration well, and it is understandable as he's probably imagining all that Rebecca could be going through. Well done,
cheers
valda
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Yes, not knowing where someone is or if she's hurt is a nerve wracking ordeal that can send you over the edge with worry and frustration. I hope he hangs in there.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
This is a wonderful chapter, Carol. I love how the wolf-dog is paying back the favour and has conceivably saved Travis's life. What a wonderful imagination you've got. A big hug, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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This is a wonderful chapter, Carol. I love how the wolf-dog is paying back the favour and has conceivably saved Travis's life. What a wonderful imagination you've got. A big hug, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Yes, I love the wolf-dog too and he's not done yet... He's very special. thank yu for the kindness and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Wolf-dog is noble and admirable, fulfilling his commitment to look after Travis, and even defending him from a pack of coyotes (well-described attack!) I was surprised but pleased that Cornelius healed the wolf-dog. Eleanor is as wise and calming as ever, and Garth would do well to listen well and follow her lead. A super chapter! As always!
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Wolf-dog is noble and admirable, fulfilling his commitment to look after Travis, and even defending him from a pack of coyotes (well-described attack!) I was surprised but pleased that Cornelius healed the wolf-dog. Eleanor is as wise and calming as ever, and Garth would do well to listen well and follow her lead. A super chapter! As always!
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Cornelius is finding a few soft spots in his akeup now and then and I don't think he knows exactly what to do about it. It's either that or he goes up in a puff of smoke. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Another amazing chapter full of suspense and magical creatures, friends and foes reunitated to save the day. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Another amazing chapter full of suspense and magical creatures, friends and foes reunitated to save the day. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Ghosts galore in this story...some good and some not so good. Lots going on and its about to get even busier. Thanks for the review and taking the time to read.
Smiles, Carol
