Veil of Secrets
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15 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
Sorry for the late review, Carol, I've been really busy this past week. I could really feel the intensity here and I was so relieved when Rebecca recovered towards the end of the chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Sorry for the late review, Carol, I've been really busy this past week. I could really feel the intensity here and I was so relieved when Rebecca recovered towards the end of the chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2025
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Thanks for giving me so much of your time...I know how difficult it is to keep up with the site and our normal life (if that is such a thing) LOL. I really appreciate it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wy Jung
The wolf-dog's ears flicked. Then, a deep, mournful howl escaped his chest and the whispering began.
Really enjoyed the scene that followed this. ...and the use of the light blue to signify the whisperers...
Side note: how did I almost forget about Miriam in all the action ...? Shame on me!
>>OK Travis, do the thing! On to the next chapter.
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The wolf-dog's ears flicked. Then, a deep, mournful howl escaped his chest and the whispering began.
Really enjoyed the scene that followed this. ...and the use of the light blue to signify the whisperers...
Side note: how did I almost forget about Miriam in all the action ...? Shame on me!
>>OK Travis, do the thing! On to the next chapter.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The tension between the ghosts kept me wanting to read. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. The tension between the ghosts kept me wanting to read. I look forward to the next chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2025
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Thanks so much for following this story too. I love all my Eleanor stories..This is the fourth in a series. And I know there will be at least a fifth one that is also rolling around in my head. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from karenina
Great!
Wait!
What does Lenore have to do?
Am I the only one worried Miriam or Rebecca must be released?
Oh, geez.
Travis needs to find Garth before Lenore does something that can't be undone!
You're amazing...
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Great!
Wait!
What does Lenore have to do?
Am I the only one worried Miriam or Rebecca must be released?
Oh, geez.
Travis needs to find Garth before Lenore does something that can't be undone!
You're amazing...
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Travis is on his way for help but the boy might need a little help... Remember who the author is ...things don't come easy. LOl
Smiles, Carol
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Oh, don't I know it!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Each chapter is more intriguing more dramatic than the previous and each one is riveting reading. Travis is very brave to leave the cottage but wolf dog is a good protector. Great work Carol. Loving this, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Each chapter is more intriguing more dramatic than the previous and each one is riveting reading. Travis is very brave to leave the cottage but wolf dog is a good protector. Great work Carol. Loving this, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This lady can't keep up with the kindness of everyone that is reading and reviewing my stories. I am beyond elated and thankful.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Excellent descriptions of spiritual beings and nature intertwining with the real world, and the overlap is confusing for some of the characters. I like that the dog will lead Travis to help, perhaps to Garth? And Rebecca will choose to return to life. Much suspense. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Excellent descriptions of spiritual beings and nature intertwining with the real world, and the overlap is confusing for some of the characters. I like that the dog will lead Travis to help, perhaps to Garth? And Rebecca will choose to return to life. Much suspense. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Writing the part about Lenore and her visions was difficult for me...Wasn't sure I was envisioning it right. But I won't have to do much more of that...thank heavens. Now Wolf Dog will have to protect and lead Travis to Eleanor or Garth.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a really pivotal point in Rebecca's life and the boy, Travis, is in charge of saving her. It is hard to believe that he has to follow a dog to find his way, but he agrees and leaves Rebecca in Lenora's care.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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This is a really pivotal point in Rebecca's life and the boy, Travis, is in charge of saving her. It is hard to believe that he has to follow a dog to find his way, but he agrees and leaves Rebecca in Lenora's care.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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The young boy has no idea where they are or where anything else is for that matter. Wolf-dog will take care of him ...in a big way as they travel.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Some of this seems beyond my understanding, Rebecca's passing between life and the edge of death, and back to life. Lenore says, "I won't fail this time," but is she going to heal Rebecca, or kill her? I'll wait to read the next segment to find out. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Some of this seems beyond my understanding, Rebecca's passing between life and the edge of death, and back to life. Lenore says, "I won't fail this time," but is she going to heal Rebecca, or kill her? I'll wait to read the next segment to find out. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This lady can't keep up with the kindness of everyone that is reading and reviewing my stories. I am beyond elated and thankful.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
And just like that, you let us hanging:) what sorcery is that? I liked this chapter very much this parallel between the present and the past, and the sense of unfinished business.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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And just like that, you let us hanging:) what sorcery is that? I liked this chapter very much this parallel between the present and the past, and the sense of unfinished business.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This lady can't keep up with the kindness of everyone that is reading and reviewing my stories. I am beyond elated and thankful.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A lot happened in this post. We are getting closer to solving all of the mysterious this story holds an I'm pretty sure Garth is going to be led to Rebecca by Trevor and a wolf-dog. I dol like this story.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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A lot happened in this post. We are getting closer to solving all of the mysterious this story holds an I'm pretty sure Garth is going to be led to Rebecca by Trevor and a wolf-dog. I dol like this story.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This lady can't keep up with the kindness of everyone that is reading and reviewing my stories. I am beyond elated and thankful.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
