Veil of Secrets
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Comment from Wy Jung
The whiskey-stinking smugglers had long since resigned to their fate and slumped against the dirt walls. But the women? They weren't giving up.
NIiiiice! Of course they aren't!
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The whiskey-stinking smugglers had long since resigned to their fate and slumped against the dirt walls. But the women? They weren't giving up.
NIiiiice! Of course they aren't!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
Comment from karenina
Oh, you do know how to turn up the tension! Those women need a miracle and Garth, though understandably torn, will provide it...
Poor Rebecca...she must hold on!
Eleanor ought to get hazard pay -- she's been torn in multiple directions!
Sooooo good!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Oh, you do know how to turn up the tension! Those women need a miracle and Garth, though understandably torn, will provide it...
Poor Rebecca...she must hold on!
Eleanor ought to get hazard pay -- she's been torn in multiple directions!
Sooooo good!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Thanks...miracle was granted...but Rebecca...I'm not so sure just yet. Lenore is a woman of mystery. She lives in her own world of spirits and the past... she reminds me of the Indians and their medicine dances.
Smiles, Carol
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Oh my.
Rebecca may not be saved?
Comment from Pearl Edwards
While the men have given up the women they were holding captive have found their strength to survive is strong, as Garth and his team get on with their task. A great chapter Carol, as always, well written.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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While the men have given up the women they were holding captive have found their strength to survive is strong, as Garth and his team get on with their task. A great chapter Carol, as always, well written.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Thanks, Valda...Most women, especially ones who have had children or cared for others, seem to be stronger when its needed... they have that survival mode. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
This was another intense chapter, Carol, I could feel Eleanor's desperation to get to the women, and the storm really added to the tension. Another excellent read, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This was another intense chapter, Carol, I could feel Eleanor's desperation to get to the women, and the storm really added to the tension. Another excellent read, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for following and enjoying the story. Your thoughts always mean so much to me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
What a terrible thing for the women to be buried and fearing the entire tunnel will collapse on them. But it is worse for Garth as he senses Rebecca's need for him, but he doesn't know where she is, and he does know where the women in trouble are.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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What a terrible thing for the women to be buried and fearing the entire tunnel will collapse on them. But it is worse for Garth as he senses Rebecca's need for him, but he doesn't know where she is, and he does know where the women in trouble are.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for following and enjoying the story. Your thoughts always mean so much to me.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Continuing drama and tension - but Eleanor is nearing the women and with the help of Garth and his men they will get there in time, and then they will find Rebecca. We'll see Travis restored to his mother too. I don't feel sad that Jack and his mates have come to the end they deserved.
Wendy
Check: "The storm had disrupted the energy" (three times in close proximity.)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Continuing drama and tension - but Eleanor is nearing the women and with the help of Garth and his men they will get there in time, and then they will find Rebecca. We'll see Travis restored to his mother too. I don't feel sad that Jack and his mates have come to the end they deserved.
Wendy
Check: "The storm had disrupted the energy" (three times in close proximity.)
Comment Written 07-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thank you for blessing me with your friendship and for enjoying my work. I can't tell you how happy it makes me.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I got a big mug of hot tea so I could sit back and enjoy the adventure I knew you had in store for me. Pieces are slowly coming together for the women in the tunnels and soon for Rebecca. You are clearly the master story creator, who knows how to pace a mystery, leaving readers dangling in the air, wishing they could enter the story and help the characters. If only we could reduce Garth's anxiety by telling him where Rebecca was.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I got a big mug of hot tea so I could sit back and enjoy the adventure I knew you had in store for me. Pieces are slowly coming together for the women in the tunnels and soon for Rebecca. You are clearly the master story creator, who knows how to pace a mystery, leaving readers dangling in the air, wishing they could enter the story and help the characters. If only we could reduce Garth's anxiety by telling him where Rebecca was.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I know I've sent you a personal message but I need to thank you again for the awesome review and the stars. It's awesome to know that my work is appreciated and enjoyed. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
A well-written chapter, full of good suspense. I like that Garth is sensing that Rebecca is calling to him. Eleanor is right, that the trapped women are the first priority. She seems to have a good plan. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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A well-written chapter, full of good suspense. I like that Garth is sensing that Rebecca is calling to him. Eleanor is right, that the trapped women are the first priority. She seems to have a good plan. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 07-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I know I've sent you a personal message but I need to thank you again for the awesome review and the stars. It's awesome to know that my work is appreciated and enjoyed. Thank you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was the right decision, and Garth knew it. I just hope Rebecca doesn't die, that would kill Garth too. To lose her and Allie would not be nice. Happy ever after, Carol!! Now let's get those women out, find Travis again, and save Rebecca. And then sort that Chinese jerk out!! Surely that's not a lot to ask a renowned author such as yourself?? LOL! Love you lots, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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That was the right decision, and Garth knew it. I just hope Rebecca doesn't die, that would kill Garth too. To lose her and Allie would not be nice. Happy ever after, Carol!! Now let's get those women out, find Travis again, and save Rebecca. And then sort that Chinese jerk out!! Surely that's not a lot to ask a renowned author such as yourself?? LOL! Love you lots, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 07-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thank you for blessing me with your friendship and for enjoying my work. I can't tell you how happy it makes me.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
This continues to build up so nicely, Carol.
I think the pacing of this is excellent, you mix tension with moments of relief and sudden bursts of action almost effortlessly.
I can't wait to read what happens next.
Tim
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This continues to build up so nicely, Carol.
I think the pacing of this is excellent, you mix tension with moments of relief and sudden bursts of action almost effortlessly.
I can't wait to read what happens next.
Tim
Comment Written 07-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Thank you for blessing me with your friendship and for enjoying my work. I can't tell you how happy it makes me.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
