Veil of Secrets
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Veil of Secrets - Chap 28"Mystery/Crime and Ghosts
16 total reviews
Comment from Wy Jung
-->The lantern flickered, casting shadows deep into the hollows of his eyes. "I am the one who has watched men like you soil my land for decades. The one who does not forget." His breath smelled like something rotting beneath the vines.
YESS! Priceless .
You are definitely having fun writing the bad guys!
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-->The lantern flickered, casting shadows deep into the hollows of his eyes. "I am the one who has watched men like you soil my land for decades. The one who does not forget." His breath smelled like something rotting beneath the vines.
YESS! Priceless .
You are definitely having fun writing the bad guys!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. This was an exciting chapter, caves collapsing, women in trouble, lives hanging on the edge. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. This was an exciting chapter, caves collapsing, women in trouble, lives hanging on the edge. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2025
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As always, I appreciate your time and kindness when you read my stories and enjoy them. I am so grateful.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
The cavein evened the odds between the women and their captors a d Eleanor's vision will even it more. Loving the suspense and the drama in these chapters Carol. Great storytelling.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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The cavein evened the odds between the women and their captors a d Eleanor's vision will even it more. Loving the suspense and the drama in these chapters Carol. Great storytelling.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Okay, I'm losing it.
I wanted to scream at Garth.
Sleep? Coffee? A bite of muffin?
My man, get it moving!
(Do you think reading four chapters in a row is good for my blood pressure?)
Tango is here! Eleanor "sees" the collapse....
Hurry!
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"I'm trapped, she croaked, trying to move."
(close quote needed)
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Another chapter!
My nerves are shattered!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Okay, I'm losing it.
I wanted to scream at Garth.
Sleep? Coffee? A bite of muffin?
My man, get it moving!
(Do you think reading four chapters in a row is good for my blood pressure?)
Tango is here! Eleanor "sees" the collapse....
Hurry!
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"I'm trapped, she croaked, trying to move."
(close quote needed)
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Another chapter!
My nerves are shattered!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I'm cheating because I see this smiling face that I love and no she will forgive me if I say thank you and speed race by...
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
With men and women trapped in the tunnels, you've dug yourself in even deeper. You're going to have to get them out or they'll all die. It'll be interesting to see how you do it. Plus, Rebecca is hanging on for dear life, waiting for Garth or someone to find her. This was another exciting, action-packed chapter.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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With men and women trapped in the tunnels, you've dug yourself in even deeper. You're going to have to get them out or they'll all die. It'll be interesting to see how you do it. Plus, Rebecca is hanging on for dear life, waiting for Garth or someone to find her. This was another exciting, action-packed chapter.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
So Eleanor has detected some people that are buried, but in a space, they are in trouble and in danger of being covered completely, they are also with their captors, which is most u fortunate, Garth screams out requiring digging equipment, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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So Eleanor has detected some people that are buried, but in a space, they are in trouble and in danger of being covered completely, they are also with their captors, which is most u fortunate, Garth screams out requiring digging equipment, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Most welcome
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This time I am going to comment on the poetic language you used in this description:"newly formed ribbons of rainwater snaked down the slopes, carving paths through the mud and washing away soil and roots. Water, relentless and searching, pushed into cracks and crevices, seeping into the unseen depths below." it's so beautiful and moving. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This time I am going to comment on the poetic language you used in this description:"newly formed ribbons of rainwater snaked down the slopes, carving paths through the mud and washing away soil and roots. Water, relentless and searching, pushed into cracks and crevices, seeping into the unseen depths below." it's so beautiful and moving. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
You just continue to build the tension, my friend.
I really cant wait to see how this all plays out.
Eleanor needs to do some sort of ethereal exercising to hone her ability to see shit and figure out better the who what where part LOL
Tim x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You just continue to build the tension, my friend.
I really cant wait to see how this all plays out.
Eleanor needs to do some sort of ethereal exercising to hone her ability to see shit and figure out better the who what where part LOL
Tim x
Comment Written 03-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The tunnel seems to have collapsed because of the rain and age of it. If that is true, they won't be battling dust, it will be thick, muddy water and probably some rocks falling through in several places. Unless the water hasn't penetrated, and it's all Cornelius's fault. Rescuing the people underground is just one more thing to delay finding poor Rebecca.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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The tunnel seems to have collapsed because of the rain and age of it. If that is true, they won't be battling dust, it will be thick, muddy water and probably some rocks falling through in several places. Unless the water hasn't penetrated, and it's all Cornelius's fault. Rescuing the people underground is just one more thing to delay finding poor Rebecca.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
This chapter is tension-filled. Your descriptions of the collapsing of the tunnels makes me feel like I'm right there and about to suffocate! And Eleanor's visions are amazing. I hope she can figure out where Rebecca is. Great writing! Hugs. Carol
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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This chapter is tension-filled. Your descriptions of the collapsing of the tunnels makes me feel like I'm right there and about to suffocate! And Eleanor's visions are amazing. I hope she can figure out where Rebecca is. Great writing! Hugs. Carol
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Type A personalities must respond! LOL. Thank you, my friend.
