Veil of Secrets
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13 total reviews
Comment from Wy Jung
Now another helper to the good side. Two, as a matter of fact! And just in time. Conversation for later, I'm curious about how much control Eleanor has over when she can vaporize to another place and also what happened to the lawyer...and if Donatelli would be able to be a ghost if he died. So many layers to the story. Intriguing.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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Now another helper to the good side. Two, as a matter of fact! And just in time. Conversation for later, I'm curious about how much control Eleanor has over when she can vaporize to another place and also what happened to the lawyer...and if Donatelli would be able to be a ghost if he died. So many layers to the story. Intriguing.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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This particular book has more ghosts than any of the others...It wasn't intended but it just happened. The normal characters are Eleanor, Danni, Charles,,,,Miriam will probably stay in the next book too and Allie only comes now and then to talk to Garth when he needs it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great chapter Csrol. Girstly the cavein trapping more women and their captors and then Travis. I really enjoyed the interaction between boy and wolfdog. Well done Carol, loving it.
Chee
Valda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Great chapter Csrol. Girstly the cavein trapping more women and their captors and then Travis. I really enjoyed the interaction between boy and wolfdog. Well done Carol, loving it.
Chee
Valda
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
I am consistently impressed with your ability at interweaving the numerous plots without a stumble!
Travis survived a catastrophe and who is this woman who raised the wolfdog?
Garth better get a move on!
This is dark, mysterious...and thrilling!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I am consistently impressed with your ability at interweaving the numerous plots without a stumble!
Travis survived a catastrophe and who is this woman who raised the wolfdog?
Garth better get a move on!
This is dark, mysterious...and thrilling!
Karenina
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I'm cheating because I see this smiling face that I love and no she will forgive me if I say thank you and speed race by...
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
You are most imaginative Carol, having ghosts and detectives, evil badmen, (some more evil than others) cavorting around the wild, now a wolf dog, but seemingly gentle, and a wild women, comes from nowhere, seemingly to help, trucks, stuck in a collapsed tunnel, trafficked women suck also, well done Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You are most imaginative Carol, having ghosts and detectives, evil badmen, (some more evil than others) cavorting around the wild, now a wolf dog, but seemingly gentle, and a wild women, comes from nowhere, seemingly to help, trucks, stuck in a collapsed tunnel, trafficked women suck also, well done Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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You don't have to answer anything...I just want you to know that I read your reviews, appreciated them and feel blessed that you enjoy what I do.
Thanks so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Jacob1395
It was so lucky for Travis that the dog's owner was there at the end. I could feel the steadily rising tension so well in this chapter, Carol and I love how you set the scene. Another excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
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It was so lucky for Travis that the dog's owner was there at the end. I could feel the steadily rising tension so well in this chapter, Carol and I love how you set the scene. Another excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Nothing like upping the challenges. The tunnel collapses, the women prisoners with the bad guys are trapped with them, a tree falls on Travis stopping his effort to get help for Rebecca and the girl, and a wolf-dog scares him half to death until his owner shows up. Who is this mysterious stranger?
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Nothing like upping the challenges. The tunnel collapses, the women prisoners with the bad guys are trapped with them, a tree falls on Travis stopping his effort to get help for Rebecca and the girl, and a wolf-dog scares him half to death until his owner shows up. Who is this mysterious stranger?
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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I am thrilled to see your reviews every day and I am so sorry that I fall so far behind. But know I truly appreciate everything you have to say and the smile you give me.
Smiles, Carol
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Don't worry if you don't get my reviews acknowledged. I now have your problem with 64 things to answer and it is my first day when I can sit up after six days of flu
Comment from Wendy G
A rescue dog is exactly what is needed just at this difficult moment. Travis has done well but he is fortunate not to be killed by the falling tree. Maybe Travis or the woman can get the dog to help Garth to find Rebecca and the others .... A lot of tension. Perhaps some of the traffickers will choose to defy their boss too.
Wendy
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A rescue dog is exactly what is needed just at this difficult moment. Travis has done well but he is fortunate not to be killed by the falling tree. Maybe Travis or the woman can get the dog to help Garth to find Rebecca and the others .... A lot of tension. Perhaps some of the traffickers will choose to defy their boss too.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
Well now I understand. You enjoy taking your readers on emotional roller coasters. Just when we think Travis will get help, a wolfdog appears, of all things, and Travis is trapped under tree roots.
We still need to know what's going on with Jenna and Donitelli, and if Antonio is still taking care of the baby, and if Zhang is going to pop up again, and if Garth ever finds Rebecca and now Amelia, and if Althea resurfaces and is reunited with Travis, and if Miriam becomes free of the mirror, and if Eleanor and Jenna come together. Whew! You have a lot more writing to do, and I'm loving it.
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Well now I understand. You enjoy taking your readers on emotional roller coasters. Just when we think Travis will get help, a wolfdog appears, of all things, and Travis is trapped under tree roots.
We still need to know what's going on with Jenna and Donitelli, and if Antonio is still taking care of the baby, and if Zhang is going to pop up again, and if Garth ever finds Rebecca and now Amelia, and if Althea resurfaces and is reunited with Travis, and if Miriam becomes free of the mirror, and if Eleanor and Jenna come together. Whew! You have a lot more writing to do, and I'm loving it.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love this chapter. I like how you are able to sustain two plots simultaneously. And again left hanging:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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I love this chapter. I like how you are able to sustain two plots simultaneously. And again left hanging:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Wow, this was an action packed chapter. All this stuff going on. Eleanor has got her hands full. Hopefully Rebecca will get rescued soon.
Well done sis,
Cecilia xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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Carol,
Wow, this was an action packed chapter. All this stuff going on. Eleanor has got her hands full. Hopefully Rebecca will get rescued soon.
Well done sis,
Cecilia xoxo
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2025
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My eyes are crossing and my fingers are about to fall off...I certainly appreciate that you put up with me and I keep trying to keep up but it doesn't work.
Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome
