Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Visiting the Dragon Lady"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I have waited two days to read this chapter to give it the six it deserved. I'm not wavering in my thoughts about Tomlin, though.... Okay, just a niggle of wavering. Lol. But why did he hate Waylon so much? There had to be something going on. And why would someone kill him and try to frame Dougie? Yes, I do believe he was framed and you really should look into that more! :)) So, what does Elaine think about her son in hospital, and under suspicion? She hasn't said anything. I need to know these things so I can find out who has done all this. Aha! Light bulb moment. Did Elaine murder Tomlin when she found out what he was doing? No, that would mean she almost killed her son. Hmm. I guess I'll have to wait and see! Loved this well written chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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I have waited two days to read this chapter to give it the six it deserved. I'm not wavering in my thoughts about Tomlin, though.... Okay, just a niggle of wavering. Lol. But why did he hate Waylon so much? There had to be something going on. And why would someone kill him and try to frame Dougie? Yes, I do believe he was framed and you really should look into that more! :)) So, what does Elaine think about her son in hospital, and under suspicion? She hasn't said anything. I need to know these things so I can find out who has done all this. Aha! Light bulb moment. Did Elaine murder Tomlin when she found out what he was doing? No, that would mean she almost killed her son. Hmm. I guess I'll have to wait and see! Loved this well written chapter, my friend. Well done! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Elaine is the mother of Miranda's first husband, Farley. Dougie was a live in boyfriend after her divorce. Thank you so much for this awesome review and the extra sparkling star. Gretchen
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed this chapter! The way you created tension between Miranda and Elaine was so interesting. I loved how you brought in the mystery of Mr. Tomlin. Your writing made it easy for me to picture everything. I also thought it was great how you showed Miranda's suspicion - it made me want to keep reading! Keep up the fantastic work. I'm looking forward to more!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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I really enjoyed this chapter! The way you created tension between Miranda and Elaine was so interesting. I loved how you brought in the mystery of Mr. Tomlin. Your writing made it easy for me to picture everything. I also thought it was great how you showed Miranda's suspicion - it made me want to keep reading! Keep up the fantastic work. I'm looking forward to more!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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thank you so much, Michael. I really appreciate this. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Oh my word Gretchen,
the animosity between those two is palpable. I liked that Elaine let Miranda know that she doesn't know everything. I suspect that she's right. It's rather bizarre that the hatred would go so far as to act as if you enjoyed some crap wine just to punish another person though. It sounds like these two could come to blows without too much provocation. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Oh my word Gretchen,
the animosity between those two is palpable. I liked that Elaine let Miranda know that she doesn't know everything. I suspect that she's right. It's rather bizarre that the hatred would go so far as to act as if you enjoyed some crap wine just to punish another person though. It sounds like these two could come to blows without too much provocation. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 01-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Elaine and Miranda have come to blows. They bring out the worst in each other. Luckily, I had a great mother in law and this is all fiction. Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
I'm with her, don't dump the crappy wine, it might be the last buzz I ever get. LOL. But leave to Miranda, to pitch it in the trash anyway. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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I'm with her, don't dump the crappy wine, it might be the last buzz I ever get. LOL. But leave to Miranda, to pitch it in the trash anyway. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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I would have taken the wine back but Elaine wasn't going to give it to her. Thank you for the wonderful review and the nice extra star. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Elaine is not nice. LoL another excellent chapter. I like Miranda. She is dealing with a lot. Thank God for mitch.... he sounds like a good guy..... a keeper.
I'm not sure about these two.... maybe is a misspelled word maybe not.
"I hadn't (though) about that, to be honest" *thought?
"She (sakes) her head. "She's talking to the grief counselor." *shake?
Well done!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Elaine is not nice. LoL another excellent chapter. I like Miranda. She is dealing with a lot. Thank God for mitch.... he sounds like a good guy..... a keeper.
I'm not sure about these two.... maybe is a misspelled word maybe not.
"I hadn't (though) about that, to be honest" *thought?
"She (sakes) her head. "She's talking to the grief counselor." *shake?
Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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You were exactly right about those misspells. I appreciate you pointing them out. Thank you for this excellent review. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
You always write interesting stories that flow very well when they're read aloud. It makes a real pleasure when I have to listen to it rather than being able to read it. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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You always write interesting stories that flow very well when they're read aloud. It makes a real pleasure when I have to listen to it rather than being able to read it. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a wonderful weekend and may God bless you.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
A different way of looking at Mr. Tomlin. Interesting. Maybe not an abuser but a person to talk with if you're gay. That changes the whole thing and would actually make some sense. I can't wait to read more.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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A different way of looking at Mr. Tomlin. Interesting. Maybe not an abuser but a person to talk with if you're gay. That changes the whole thing and would actually make some sense. I can't wait to read more.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you for not making up your mind about Tomlin. While he was tough to take, he might not be all bad. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
I guess I'll never understand women, they smart ass each other a lot, men go about it differently, my dear wife is one of the good guys, women tend tend to value decisions quickly. I love watching them, we've got such lovely female friends. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : She s(h)akes her head
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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I guess I'll never understand women, they smart ass each other a lot, men go about it differently, my dear wife is one of the good guys, women tend tend to value decisions quickly. I love watching them, we've got such lovely female friends. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : She s(h)akes her head
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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I surround myself with good friends, but have been involved with many nasty ones. I learned early on, if they'll talk about others to you, they will talk to others about you. Thank you so much for this., Gretchen
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Perhaps Miranda has the wrong impression of Mr Tomlin? I feel for Waylon as he was only just getting used to his Dad being around and now this happens. Your story has some complex emotions that we can identify with here Gretchen, a clever story, well written as always, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Perhaps Miranda has the wrong impression of Mr Tomlin? I feel for Waylon as he was only just getting used to his Dad being around and now this happens. Your story has some complex emotions that we can identify with here Gretchen, a clever story, well written as always, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. I feel bad for Waylon too. gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
She is a dragon Lady anyone would have hated to have as a mother-in-law. It doesn't sound as though she is going to be of a low of help to Miranda. I hope Dougie isn't guilty of killing the teacher.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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She is a dragon Lady anyone would have hated to have as a mother-in-law. It doesn't sound as though she is going to be of a low of help to Miranda. I hope Dougie isn't guilty of killing the teacher.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2025
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Thank you. Elaine doesn't like Miranda, but she knows there is no stopping her. Gretchen
