The Journey of a Raindrop
Exploration the life cycle of a single raindrop.6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Farmer rely on rain for their crops. That's how farmers make a living. Thank you for sharing the importance of a raindrop in this contest entry. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Farmer rely on rain for their crops. That's how farmers make a living. Thank you for sharing the importance of a raindrop in this contest entry. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Hi Barbara,
Thank you for your pleasant review. It was fascinating to think about one single raindrop falling from the sky. My imagination had a fun day.
Take care and stay well.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Peter,
This is a wonderful poem. You poem is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.you pull the reader into your poem as if they are standing there taking the journey with the raindrop.
Great job,
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Peter,
This is a wonderful poem. You poem is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.you pull the reader into your poem as if they are standing there taking the journey with the raindrop.
Great job,
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Dear Cecilia
My sincere and big thanks for your so kind and wonderful review.I love that the flow of the poem, and the strong imagery, pulled you into the raindrop’s journey.Thank you for your kindness and for sharing a few steps along that tiny, transient world. Happy poetic adventures to you, wishing you eternal inspiration!
Bless you
Peter
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Thank you and may you have a Blessed day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love to see the early morning dew in the summer as the rose petals glisten in the sun, your imagination was freed in this poem for the contest, I love this form Peter, and I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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I love to see the early morning dew in the summer as the rose petals glisten in the sun, your imagination was freed in this poem for the contest, I love this form Peter, and I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
Dear Dolly,
Your words are like morning sunlight spilling over those rose petals—thank you for such a radiant, heartfelt response. I’m overjoyed the imagery of the dew and the poem’s wandering spirit resonated with you; it’s a gift to share these small, glistening moments of Mother Nature through verse.
Wishing you endless summer mornings and luck in all your own creations
Bless you and stay safe
xx
Comment from Darlene BoClair
The whole presentation of the photo and well poem is glowing.
I love your title. The words are create the perfect minute poetry contest entry. Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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The whole presentation of the photo and well poem is glowing.
I love your title. The words are create the perfect minute poetry contest entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Hi Darlene
Thank you for your lovely words and encouragement.
Bless you
Comment from royowen
Without the raindrop's journey, the earth's water would become very polluted indeed, creation's washing machine is how God's mind works, even a place to dispose of the very thing that gives us a chance with God Himself, only that's his blood, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Without the raindrop's journey, the earth's water would become very polluted indeed, creation's washing machine is how God's mind works, even a place to dispose of the very thing that gives us a chance with God Himself, only that's his blood, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Roy, for your thoughtful and encouraging words. Well spotted re typo!
Take care Roy.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is beautiful! I love the way you capture the journey of nature. I really felt the sense of freedom in your final lines. The idea of a "short-lived kiss" and the description of the "twilight sleep" was perfect. It's a lovely poem that makes me wish for summer! Keep sharing your beautiful work!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Your poem is beautiful! I love the way you capture the journey of nature. I really felt the sense of freedom in your final lines. The idea of a "short-lived kiss" and the description of the "twilight sleep" was perfect. It's a lovely poem that makes me wish for summer! Keep sharing your beautiful work!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
It is very much appreciated.
Take care.
