Forest Alliance
rhyming verses29 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Survival awaits those who are willing to cooperate! A very good moral of the story, indeed. I loved the font you used - that white back-shadowing is especially symbolic, I think.
In stanza two, line two, the word "predators" needs an apostrophe before the 's' because it's possessive and not plural.
Nicely done!
xo
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Survival awaits those who are willing to cooperate! A very good moral of the story, indeed. I loved the font you used - that white back-shadowing is especially symbolic, I think.
In stanza two, line two, the word "predators" needs an apostrophe before the 's' because it's possessive and not plural.
Nicely done!
xo
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the color you used. It was good you used many of the animals that are threatened by a hawk. Very descriptive and well written. Great job.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the color you used. It was good you used many of the animals that are threatened by a hawk. Very descriptive and well written. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Dear Sanku, I'm so glad no harm came to any of those small forest creatures:) But what a magnificent predator you've portrayed here with all the force of your poetic sentiments! I love the way nature looks after its own, sometimes, and we see this sequence of warning signals: how blessed is the mutual reliance/on the beautiful forest alliance. Superb!
A couple of edits: empe(r)or; the vigilant bird(')s timely presage.
Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Dear Sanku, I'm so glad no harm came to any of those small forest creatures:) But what a magnificent predator you've portrayed here with all the force of your poetic sentiments! I love the way nature looks after its own, sometimes, and we see this sequence of warning signals: how blessed is the mutual reliance/on the beautiful forest alliance. Superb!
A couple of edits: empe(r)or; the vigilant bird(')s timely presage.
Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much .Thank you very much for spotting the typos..
yeah its a wonder how these small animals have sharp sensors!
Comment from DonandVicki
I think I saw the same documentary, I also love watching the David Attenburo series on wildlife. The poem speaks to the reliance that knits nature together.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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I think I saw the same documentary, I also love watching the David Attenburo series on wildlife. The poem speaks to the reliance that knits nature together.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from papa55mike
I've seen hawks snatch their prey several times. It's amazing how most birds know all the danger calls. This is a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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I've seen hawks snatch their prey several times. It's amazing how most birds know all the danger calls. This is a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem creates fear in the creatures that know the hawk is coming. It allows the reader to sympathize with the smaller creatures. I can relate, it is how I feel with this new administration. I never know what he will do next.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Your poem creates fear in the creatures that know the hawk is coming. It allows the reader to sympathize with the smaller creatures. I can relate, it is how I feel with this new administration. I never know what he will do next.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Nature is wonderful how all the creatures work together to keep each other safe and you've shown that beautifullly in your rhyming verses, sanku. A lovely presentation of nature at work.
cheers
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Nature is wonderful how all the creatures work together to keep each other safe and you've shown that beautifullly in your rhyming verses, sanku. A lovely presentation of nature at work.
cheers
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much.
Comment from royowen
I'm amazed at how God has equipped every predator, every one of the hunted prey with a defence and sense of danger, and the predator itself with the equipment and ability to hunt, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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I'm amazed at how God has equipped every predator, every one of the hunted prey with a defence and sense of danger, and the predator itself with the equipment and ability to hunt, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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I know God is great indeed! Thanks for stopping by.
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Most welcome
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Sanku,
This is a wonderful poem. I am a nature lover and you explained in that poem what goes on in the nature world when there is a hawk in the area.
Great job
Cecilia
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Sanku,
This is a wonderful poem. I am a nature lover and you explained in that poem what goes on in the nature world when there is a hawk in the area.
Great job
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome
Comment from Mintybee
This poem on the way smaller birds protect each other from larger birds of prey is interesting and builds a sense of camaraderie. The unreliable rhyme made it read a bit awkwardly for me, but I still enjoyed the poem overall.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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This poem on the way smaller birds protect each other from larger birds of prey is interesting and builds a sense of camaraderie. The unreliable rhyme made it read a bit awkwardly for me, but I still enjoyed the poem overall.
Mintybee
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2025
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Thank you very much..
