Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very lovely and so true poem you have penned for this contest. You used great descriptive words and very adorable artwork. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thank you Teri! These competitions are so hard because there's so many amazing writers 😊

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Children are proof of God's Love on earth. I completely agree, and I've spent my life blessed to be working with children. I never truly worked all my life. It was my pleasure. This poem is beautiful and flows well. Your supporting image also elevates this important message. God bless your granddaughter and all chilten. I enjoyed reviewing this. Best wishes!

Alex :)

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025

Thank you Alex! What a blessing to be around children, they are truly fun to listen to. Thanks for the review.

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 26-Jan-2025

You're welcome. :)

Comment from RodG

Excellent

You have portrayed children as we love to see them-in their innocence. Your Kyrielle really emphasizes this wonderful theme, that children are uncorrupted, colorblind, and pure of heart. Rod

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025

Thank you Rod for the review. A nice way to end my weekend.