Forsake?
to embrace all~ the will of the Godhead8 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Clever the way you shaped the piece. Must have taken quite some time.
I am unsure whether this slams or praises The Latter-Day Saints, a Christian sect, mimicked with regularity as being non-Christian, even though the true name is The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, not Mormons which outsiders call them.
The red coloring is a little bright, and the font if larger might help the aged read it more easily but then it likely wouldn't fit.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Clever the way you shaped the piece. Must have taken quite some time.
I am unsure whether this slams or praises The Latter-Day Saints, a Christian sect, mimicked with regularity as being non-Christian, even though the true name is The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, not Mormons which outsiders call them.
The red coloring is a little bright, and the font if larger might help the aged read it more easily but then it likely wouldn't fit.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem's form presents a more visible focus on eternity. I like the line:
To teach with reverence
Those double nonet forms are a challenge. At first I thought it might be a chiasmus being utilized, but then I read the author notes. Nice share.
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This poem's form presents a more visible focus on eternity. I like the line:
To teach with reverence
Those double nonet forms are a challenge. At first I thought it might be a chiasmus being utilized, but then I read the author notes. Nice share.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
Comment from Lana Marie
Another good double no nonet. You sow seeds, of hope into people's hearts every time you write these. I've read a few over the course of time, but haven't stopped to review every time I read them. I didn't want to have you be sick of the same person reviewing so I try to space it out.
I see you changed your author name. I enjoyed your spiritual writing.
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Another good double no nonet. You sow seeds, of hope into people's hearts every time you write these. I've read a few over the course of time, but haven't stopped to review every time I read them. I didn't want to have you be sick of the same person reviewing so I try to space it out.
I see you changed your author name. I enjoyed your spiritual writing.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
Comment from Boogienights
Interesting. I've never thought about the how different religions view the path to salvation. I've always wondered about the whole, ask God for forgiveness at the end and it will be granted. A well written poem.
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Interesting. I've never thought about the how different religions view the path to salvation. I've always wondered about the whole, ask God for forgiveness at the end and it will be granted. A well written poem.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
Comment from Neonewman
This is another incredible double nonet poem, John. The spirituality flows within and hopefully finds its way into many poet's reviews. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
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This is another incredible double nonet poem, John. The spirituality flows within and hopefully finds its way into many poet's reviews. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
You've almost made it again, do you have other poetic methods of presentation in form? Yes, there are so many great ones, I've written, a few, but not for a long time, well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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You've almost made it again, do you have other poetic methods of presentation in form? Yes, there are so many great ones, I've written, a few, but not for a long time, well done, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Only if we knew, but in the meantime this would do as a mesage of re-birth:"he people to belong with the Christ
To encourage~ not to forsake-
our thought of eternity
O the gain with Jesus
Will all find the cure
for one's neglect
of import
before
God?"
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Only if we knew, but in the meantime this would do as a mesage of re-birth:"he people to belong with the Christ
To encourage~ not to forsake-
our thought of eternity
O the gain with Jesus
Will all find the cure
for one's neglect
of import
before
God?"
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really appreciate the way you focus on encouraging others to embrace Christ and consider the importance of eternity. I find it so interesting how you bring in the value and salvation. There's a sincerity to your words that stands out, and it leaves me thinking. Great work!
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I really appreciate the way you focus on encouraging others to embrace Christ and consider the importance of eternity. I find it so interesting how you bring in the value and salvation. There's a sincerity to your words that stands out, and it leaves me thinking. Great work!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
