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Willing Hearts

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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?

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Comment from Sanku
Exceptional
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So we come to the end of this novel Noah is willing to make adjustments in future life. Sami too The novel has many characters who has willing hearts to do something for the others .So your title is appropriate ,I feel

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacob1395
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I'm really happy for Noah and Sami and that they have finally agreed to tie the knot, I'm certain they will always be happy together. Another excellent chapter, Barbara, I really enjoyed it.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025


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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Exceptional
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So we finally made it to the end! This has been another of your great works and I hope others agree with me. I will work on a title for this as soon as I can.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025


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    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Barbara,
well, it took awhile to get there, but they're finally going to get married. Of course knowing someone for only a month before marriage is most probably a foolish thing. People who have known each other for years still end up divorced, however, this is just a story. I'm just glad it had a happy ending. Congratulations.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry
Exceptional
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Congratulations on the book. "Awakening A Heart", is what came to me. good writing, and another great accomplishment. I will be gone a lot until it warms up more and the humidity goes down. Hurty here. Karen

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    I like that title idea. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Exceptional
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Noah is making adjustments in his career to allow for a more stable home life. I wonder if teaching will satisfy him, as he's always been a doer. I hope Sami doesn't get herself involved in any more dangerous schemes, too. I'm glad she got her P.E. schedule, so maybe that will keep her out of trouble. I'm also glad Galvin was removed from duty. He was a major pain. Noah has made concessions. I hope it will be worth it, but that's love. What a gorgeous ring! Congratulations on completing another great novel. judi

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by judiverse on 27-Jan-2025
    You're welcome. Best of success with it. judi
Comment from lyenochka
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Congratulations on completing yet another book, Barbara! I was waiting for when that expression the "love of his life" was going to come out in the book. You have it in your synopsis but it appeared here again so I think that could be your title instead of "willing hearts" which works for all the characters who have such willing hearts to help each other on Noah's team.

Eighty-thirty until eleven, (Eight)

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the kind review. I laughed at that correction. I can't believe I did that. But I sure did. I like the idea for the title.
reply by lyenochka on 27-Jan-2025
    Our fingers have minds of their own!
Comment from Teri7
Exceptional
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This is a really great six-star chapter my friend. I look forward to your new Novel. It sounds like it will be a great one too. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
Exceptional
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This is another excellent chapter and the final chapter of an excellent book. I do not have enough six stars for every chapter. I celebrate your book on the last chapter. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
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What a wonderful ending to an excellent story, I know your characters are written with their day to day adventures, and through this subtle but swift getting.to know one another, I do believe we can get to know our intended, more swiftly than is sometimes the case, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by royowen on 27-Jan-2025
    Well done