Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have 5 votes!

Flay the foolish .


I like the the two Fs and I learned a new word flay

.I have seen people post some crazy things they did during a huge storm or even during an in coming hurricane/ cyclone .

Mostly go surfing or flip- flopping in flooded streets etc.

You captured all the wrath of Mother Nature in a hand full of words.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thanks so much, Franca!

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Mystery Poet,
Aw, such a perfect cinquain for January. Aptly said of the cold and and its warning of what's coming. Sending you my best today as always and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally Law :))

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thanks so much Sally!

Comment from Khobe Saari

Excellent

I love the emotion in this one. Nature is powerful and this brought memories of haunting snowstorm Ive experience. Cold can indeed flay the foolish if we don't heed mother nature's warning. We'll done, Khobe

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thanks so much!!

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Nice picture and personification: "sharp winds menacingly whisper...
beware!" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025

Thanks so much Iza!!