Young Love
Walking home in the cold well worth it.4 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
This is a cute poem capturing the joy of walking home from the lover's house. The narrator was able to ignore the brutal cold and focus on the beauty of the sky. Love this!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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This is a cute poem capturing the joy of walking home from the lover's house. The narrator was able to ignore the brutal cold and focus on the beauty of the sky. Love this!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thanks much for the read and feedback.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a very lovely Cinquain poem. It has all the elements for this style of poem. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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This is a very lovely Cinquain poem. It has all the elements for this style of poem. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.
Good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thanks much for the read and feedback.
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You're welcome
Comment from zanya
Good to read about young love, happy and filled with optimism and hope culminating in that revealing final phrase 'Love glow' good pic to illustrate -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Good to read about young love, happy and filled with optimism and hope culminating in that revealing final phrase 'Love glow' good pic to illustrate -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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It was a long, long time ago. But still remember that 8 block walk.
Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Barry Penfold
Nicely done. I am always amazed at how people do these short poems. Shold do well in the competition. Thanks for sharing. Image is spot on.
Take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Nicely done. I am always amazed at how people do these short poems. Shold do well in the competition. Thanks for sharing. Image is spot on.
Take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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It was a long, long time ago. But still remember that 8 block walk.
Thanks for the read and feedback.