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Young Love

Walking home in the cold well worth it.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
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This is a cute poem capturing the joy of walking home from the lover's house. The narrator was able to ignore the brutal cold and focus on the beauty of the sky. Love this!

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thanks much for the read and feedback.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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This is a very lovely Cinquain poem. It has all the elements for this style of poem. It is well organized and flows nicely from beginning to end.

Good luck in the contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
    Thanks much for the read and feedback.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 27-Jan-2025
    You're welcome
Comment from zanya
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Good to read about young love, happy and filled with optimism and hope culminating in that revealing final phrase 'Love glow' good pic to illustrate -thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
    It was a long, long time ago. But still remember that 8 block walk.
    Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Nicely done. I am always amazed at how people do these short poems. Shold do well in the competition. Thanks for sharing. Image is spot on.
Take care.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
    It was a long, long time ago. But still remember that 8 block walk.
    Thanks for the read and feedback.