broken man
a sonnet describing the emotional dishonesty of men4 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
What a profound piece dissecting through emotional consequences of being repressed. It makes me feel uncomfortable reading which is probably the purpose of the poet. Best wishes for the contest.
Anna
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What a profound piece dissecting through emotional consequences of being repressed. It makes me feel uncomfortable reading which is probably the purpose of the poet. Best wishes for the contest.
Anna
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
Comment from Trina Layne
I appreciate this piece and its subject matter.
Thank you for being brave enough to share it.
I wish you well in the contest. Real men do have feelings which can be expressed. Glad you were not forever deceived.
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I appreciate this piece and its subject matter.
Thank you for being brave enough to share it.
I wish you well in the contest. Real men do have feelings which can be expressed. Glad you were not forever deceived.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a beautiful sonnet. It is a shame that our society expect men to be emotionless. I say cry it's good for the soul. It doesn't make you any less a man.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
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This is a beautiful sonnet. It is a shame that our society expect men to be emotionless. I say cry it's good for the soul. It doesn't make you any less a man.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so honest! I loved how you wrote about breaking free from emotional suppression - it felt powerful. Your ending was perfect. For me those tears becoming a symbol of liberation. It made me feel the relief at that moment. Your words really hit the heart. Amazing work!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Your poem is so honest! I loved how you wrote about breaking free from emotional suppression - it felt powerful. Your ending was perfect. For me those tears becoming a symbol of liberation. It made me feel the relief at that moment. Your words really hit the heart. Amazing work!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your kind words
