It's a Mystery
A mystery, but I redunciate12 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
I laughed all the way through your zany conversation. By the time I envisioned and focused on one subject, your mind had changed. I can't imagine how agitated I would be if the ending of a mystery was missing. I enjoyed following your thought processes. Congrats on your well-deserved win.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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I laughed all the way through your zany conversation. By the time I envisioned and focused on one subject, your mind had changed. I can't imagine how agitated I would be if the ending of a mystery was missing. I enjoyed following your thought processes. Congrats on your well-deserved win.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much!
I appreciate your very kind review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This zany conversation reminds me of cyclical thinking, or is it circular. The stuff about 'refrained' and 'frained' is great. Amusing, witty, and a reminder that sometimes we don't get the ending of the mysteries around us no matter how hard we try until...at least a day later. Congratulations on the win.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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This zany conversation reminds me of cyclical thinking, or is it circular. The stuff about 'refrained' and 'frained' is great. Amusing, witty, and a reminder that sometimes we don't get the ending of the mysteries around us no matter how hard we try until...at least a day later. Congratulations on the win.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your great review!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Congrats in winning the contest, and I like you have no idea what a zani conversation is, but I guess a rumble will be the intuitive course of action. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Congrats in winning the contest, and I like you have no idea what a zani conversation is, but I guess a rumble will be the intuitive course of action. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your great review!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think my head is spinning after reading this zany conversation. And I'm quite convinced you could keep going for days, if not weeks, That said, no doubt about you fulfilling the prompt and keeping me amused, if not so much your wife. Well done and good luck! A great contender! Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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I think my head is spinning after reading this zany conversation. And I'm quite convinced you could keep going for days, if not weeks, That said, no doubt about you fulfilling the prompt and keeping me amused, if not so much your wife. Well done and good luck! A great contender! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate the great review.
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Oh it's you, Wayne. Well done, you got my vote:)
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smiley face here
Much appreciated!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
God, I hate you for this piece. It was so good I might not vote for mine.
And another thing, the way your mind is shown within has me questioning if we are not related. Zany is what zany does, and I do demented, too.
CONGRATULATIONS!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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God, I hate you for this piece. It was so good I might not vote for mine.
And another thing, the way your mind is shown within has me questioning if we are not related. Zany is what zany does, and I do demented, too.
CONGRATULATIONS!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the six stars! (That's a funny word.) We could be - related. But really, all writers need to do is open the lid and loosen the setscrews a bit - just not too much!
Thanks again!
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. A zany conversation, and a cleverly and humorously written piece. That would be the ultimate in frustration, to get to the end of a book and there is no appropriate conclusion, perhaps equal with sending the jigsaw pieces flying. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Lol. A zany conversation, and a cleverly and humorously written piece. That would be the ultimate in frustration, to get to the end of a book and there is no appropriate conclusion, perhaps equal with sending the jigsaw pieces flying. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Thank you! I treasure your supportive review.
Comment from Jim Wile
Really enjoyed this stream-of-consciousness rant, full of malaproprisms, etymological questions, song clips, and overall zaniness as you attempt to figure out the end of your mystery. Frustrated at every turn, you probably end up poisoning yourself with red dye #3. And then you even try to hoodwink your wonderful wife into sharing in the misery of not knowing how it ends.
Very funny!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Really enjoyed this stream-of-consciousness rant, full of malaproprisms, etymological questions, song clips, and overall zaniness as you attempt to figure out the end of your mystery. Frustrated at every turn, you probably end up poisoning yourself with red dye #3. And then you even try to hoodwink your wonderful wife into sharing in the misery of not knowing how it ends.
Very funny!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your great review!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great entry for the zany conversation contest. You are all over the place with you thoughts, but I guess that's part of the allure to this story.
It is zany for sure.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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This is a great entry for the zany conversation contest. You are all over the place with you thoughts, but I guess that's part of the allure to this story.
It is zany for sure.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you. I truly appreciate your very kind words.
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Your welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was wildly entertaining! Your rapid fire train of thought had me grinning the entire time. I love how you show small annoyances - turning them into laugh out loud moments. The "I-am-not-amused face" line. Fantastic! This is such a clever write. Bravo!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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This was wildly entertaining! Your rapid fire train of thought had me grinning the entire time. I love how you show small annoyances - turning them into laugh out loud moments. The "I-am-not-amused face" line. Fantastic! This is such a clever write. Bravo!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you! I'm excited that you found it tolerable. Tolerable, now there's a funny word.
Comment from Claire Tennant
This is the first entry I have read via FS that has had me giggling from beginning to end. Your description of disappointment and ability to use words in the real and imaginative sense resonates with me. I would be surprised if I am the only one experiencing this. The frustration of things not being as they seem, the humour beside it. It is a beautiful tale well worth reading over and over. Good luck in this contest.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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This is the first entry I have read via FS that has had me giggling from beginning to end. Your description of disappointment and ability to use words in the real and imaginative sense resonates with me. I would be surprised if I am the only one experiencing this. The frustration of things not being as they seem, the humour beside it. It is a beautiful tale well worth reading over and over. Good luck in this contest.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your very kind review.
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you are most welcome
