Veil of Secrets
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Comment from Wy Jung
Holy moly Carol. Just amazing. The is otherwordly. Without a doubt.
I had some parts that struck me but I'm too anxious to get to the next chapter to write anything beyond when the ticker tells me I've got enough words. Now I have. So onward. ...
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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Holy moly Carol. Just amazing. The is otherwordly. Without a doubt.
I had some parts that struck me but I'm too anxious to get to the next chapter to write anything beyond when the ticker tells me I've got enough words. Now I have. So onward. ...
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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It's difficult to believe that I almost tossed out any thoughts of writing stories with ghosts and now I've written five and another in the wings. I'm having fun.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pearl Edwards
The scene with Charles as he watches over Maggie is very poignant. Good to see Grayson has helped the good guys before his final breath. Lovi g this bood carol.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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The scene with Charles as he watches over Maggie is very poignant. Good to see Grayson has helped the good guys before his final breath. Lovi g this bood carol.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Might give him a chance at purgatory instead of going straight to hell. LOL I always like to try and give even the bad guys one ounce of redemption.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Well at least one is out of commission:""Guess not. You ask me, he did society a service. Or maybe Doyle was speeding and lost control. Either way, Bayside's lucky that he won't be destroying any more lives." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
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Well at least one is out of commission:""Guess not. You ask me, he did society a service. Or maybe Doyle was speeding and lost control. Either way, Bayside's lucky that he won't be destroying any more lives." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow! We had two deaths in one chapter. At least they were the bad guys. We still have a way to go. Miriam has been missing throughout the entire story, and Travis, Rebecca, and Althea are still in trouble. Donatelli has been shot. You certainly know how to keep your readers on edge. I'm loving it.
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Wow! We had two deaths in one chapter. At least they were the bad guys. We still have a way to go. Miriam has been missing throughout the entire story, and Travis, Rebecca, and Althea are still in trouble. Donatelli has been shot. You certainly know how to keep your readers on edge. I'm loving it.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
Looks like we don't have to worry about Grayson anymore, or do we. I mean, I guess you could bring him back as a bad ghost. LOL. Now we just have to worry about Mathew. Thanks for sharing.
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Looks like we don't have to worry about Grayson anymore, or do we. I mean, I guess you could bring him back as a bad ghost. LOL. Now we just have to worry about Mathew. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
Comment from Jacob1395
You're really keeping us in suspense, I need to know if Donatelli is going to pull through and I could really feel Jenna's pain as she found out what had happened, I knew it was going to be tough for whoever broke the news to her. Another excellent engaging chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed reading it.
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You're really keeping us in suspense, I need to know if Donatelli is going to pull through and I could really feel Jenna's pain as she found out what had happened, I knew it was going to be tough for whoever broke the news to her. Another excellent engaging chapter, Carol, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
Did I detect a note of regret in Grayson's veneer? Perhaps there is som good in him after all, I remember saying that God is not interested in what we are, but what we can become. This is a great post, Eleanor re energised by the presence of Charles, and regret at what vengeance can do, beautifully written, blessings Roy
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Did I detect a note of regret in Grayson's veneer? Perhaps there is som good in him after all, I remember saying that God is not interested in what we are, but what we can become. This is a great post, Eleanor re energised by the presence of Charles, and regret at what vengeance can do, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely.I continue to enjoy reading it. I do not see any need for improvement. Keep the chapters coming. Have a blessed day.
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This is another excellent chapter. You are moving the story along nicely.I continue to enjoy reading it. I do not see any need for improvement. Keep the chapters coming. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
Comment from Ulla
Hi Carol, This is another wonderful continuation to the story, albeit harrowing and somewhat cruel in places. The truth is most often just that. Now, all we can do is to find out what is happening next. I love the fact that Eleanor is back and playing a central role in this story. A big hug, Ulla xxx
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Hi Carol, This is another wonderful continuation to the story, albeit harrowing and somewhat cruel in places. The truth is most often just that. Now, all we can do is to find out what is happening next. I love the fact that Eleanor is back and playing a central role in this story. A big hug, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's all coming together and you're doing a good job writing it. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Jenna left her baby with ghost. Interesting. I understand and it makes sense on an interesting level.
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It's all coming together and you're doing a good job writing it. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Jenna left her baby with ghost. Interesting. I understand and it makes sense on an interesting level.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
