Low Hanging Fruit
Choices, free verse29 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Yes, God gives us free will.
This is a poem with few syllables but it conveys a true message. Many will relate. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Yes, God gives us free will.
This is a poem with few syllables but it conveys a true message. Many will relate. I enjoyed reading this.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Alex, for your kind and insightful review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine biblical write with warm caring undertones here and I enjoyed the sentiment and advice in this free verse for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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A fine biblical write with warm caring undertones here and I enjoyed the sentiment and advice in this free verse for the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Dolly, I always enjoy your reviews.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like your free verse, and I know for sure that I have a very hard time to distinguish my free will and my action :"se your free will wisely
Take heed lest passion
Sway your good judgment." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I like your free verse, and I know for sure that I have a very hard time to distinguish my free will and my action :"se your free will wisely
Take heed lest passion
Sway your good judgment." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your kind and insightful review.
Comment from Boogienights
Very nicely done and so true. We all must make choices in this life, but it's best to take God into consideration...he may have different plans. The very best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Very nicely done and so true. We all must make choices in this life, but it's best to take God into consideration...he may have different plans. The very best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Boogie.
Comment from Dawn Munro
"If you are without care
Give thanks to God
To continue in paradise"... Amen!
In this world, it sure seems folks are looking for that 'low-hanging fruit' a lot, doesn't it? Wonderful message! Publish this gem all over!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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"If you are without care
Give thanks to God
To continue in paradise"... Amen!
In this world, it sure seems folks are looking for that 'low-hanging fruit' a lot, doesn't it? Wonderful message! Publish this gem all over!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed the comments in your review, thank you.
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You are very welcome!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A deep message, simply put. God gives us all choices, and that is a great gift. It's up to us what to do with it! That was a good point, put well, but, there is a bit more to your post -- the advice. Don't pick that easy fruit!! The bad things really are often the easiest, or laziest choices.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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A deep message, simply put. God gives us all choices, and that is a great gift. It's up to us what to do with it! That was a good point, put well, but, there is a bit more to your post -- the advice. Don't pick that easy fruit!! The bad things really are often the easiest, or laziest choices.
Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Rhonda.
Comment from Lana Marie
That low hanging fruit cause a lot of problems from that day forward. We still have free will but many choose to still be in bondage, although they don't know it. Thank you for sharing the beginning of time.
And your opening line about Giving things to God should be a continuous thing that we do Every day, we get a chance to live and be his representatives. Enjoy your weekend.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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That low hanging fruit cause a lot of problems from that day forward. We still have free will but many choose to still be in bondage, although they don't know it. Thank you for sharing the beginning of time.
And your opening line about Giving things to God should be a continuous thing that we do Every day, we get a chance to live and be his representatives. Enjoy your weekend.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Lana, I look forward to your reviews.
Comment from Tim Margetts
Ahh for the lure of the low-hanging fruit.
I like this poem, it is an interesting look at the challenge and perils of free will.
Given to us freely, how we decide to use it shall determine our path.
Tim
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Ahh for the lure of the low-hanging fruit.
I like this poem, it is an interesting look at the challenge and perils of free will.
Given to us freely, how we decide to use it shall determine our path.
Tim
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your kind and insightful review.
Comment from ESOSTINE
The low hanging fruits are easily accessible and very tempting to indulge. I pray God's grace keeps us safe, from the dangers that lurk on our ways. Well done, dear friend. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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The low hanging fruits are easily accessible and very tempting to indulge. I pray God's grace keeps us safe, from the dangers that lurk on our ways. Well done, dear friend. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much for your kindness and generousity.
Comment from pome lover
I'm afraid I'm not a very good example of restraint, but I hope to end up with my family and friends in Heaven. There is so much low hanging fruit in this world, and by that I mean all kinds of temptation - food, things to buy, thoughts, deep dislike, the desire to relive situations badly handled and the knowledge that you can't. So many things.
To those whose better judgement helped them steer clear of temptation, congratulations!
Katharine
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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I'm afraid I'm not a very good example of restraint, but I hope to end up with my family and friends in Heaven. There is so much low hanging fruit in this world, and by that I mean all kinds of temptation - food, things to buy, thoughts, deep dislike, the desire to relive situations badly handled and the knowledge that you can't. So many things.
To those whose better judgement helped them steer clear of temptation, congratulations!
Katharine
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the excellent review, That is exactly what I meant by low hanging fruit. Thanks for noticing.
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thank you!
