Comment from
Bill Schott
This lune poem, A Life Gone, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that every life can be given immortality through being remembered.....
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
I am glad my thoughts came through in such few words. Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from
Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a pretty deep lune poem. The three lines are powerful and the meaning of everlasting memories live on. This poem flows nicely.
Good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
Thank you. I lost my husband two years ago and it has inspired alot of my writing.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 23-Jan-2025