Unseen
Lune contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Debra,
It's their problem, not yours. How difficult is it to look where you're going, and greet a passerby. Instead, many do have their phones to keep them occupied. We live in a very strange world.
Good Luck in the Lune Poetry contest!
If I walked by you, I'd invite you for a cocktail at that restaurant you're in, (in your picture). We could have a nice chat! And maybe some fish 'n chips!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Hi Debra,
It's their problem, not yours. How difficult is it to look where you're going, and greet a passerby. Instead, many do have their phones to keep them occupied. We live in a very strange world.
Good Luck in the Lune Poetry contest!
If I walked by you, I'd invite you for a cocktail at that restaurant you're in, (in your picture). We could have a nice chat! And maybe some fish 'n chips!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Hi Kimbob :)
Thank you for the good luck wishes!
A cocktail and a chat would be lovely, although they don't sell fish in chips in that particular establishment, I can recommend the braised pig cheeks! It is my brother's restaurant and a fine place to dine it is too ;)
Restaurant Auction House in Louth, Lincolnshire - check out the webpage!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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I'll do that, Deb! But I don't think I'd choose the braised pig cheeks. I thought fish 'n chips were a delicacy in England! A staple! What about tenderloin tips? Or sauteed scallops? And I'm a big fan of baked potato. LOL. I'm sure we'd have a time of it.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! Unbelievable! My guess, of course, they had their nose in their phones. How more of them don't get run over is beyond me! But what a striking lune verse and image! There's no way that's going to go unnoticed! Good luck, Debra! Hopefully you'll escape the worst of this massive storm tomorrow. Love Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Haha! Unbelievable! My guess, of course, they had their nose in their phones. How more of them don't get run over is beyond me! But what a striking lune verse and image! There's no way that's going to go unnoticed! Good luck, Debra! Hopefully you'll escape the worst of this massive storm tomorrow. Love Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Hi Debbie :) We escaped the storm, thankfully - hope you did too... Thank you for the read, best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Debra,
It's not you, my friend, it's the distracted world we live in. A wonderful lune of the red coat that should keep pedestrians from crashing into you, but not today. A comical (but not) lune poem. I hope you're okay. Geeze!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Dear Debra,
It's not you, my friend, it's the distracted world we live in. A wonderful lune of the red coat that should keep pedestrians from crashing into you, but not today. A comical (but not) lune poem. I hope you're okay. Geeze!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Hi Sal, thank you for your kind feedback and good luck wishes!
Sending my best wishes, Debra x
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Most welcome, dear Debra!
Sal :))
Comment from royowen
I know that that famous comic character the Invisible man became invisible by discarding his clothes, (got a big hairy in mid winter) but I've not heard of putting on bright clothing did, heh heh, well done Debra, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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I know that that famous comic character the Invisible man became invisible by discarding his clothes, (got a big hairy in mid winter) but I've not heard of putting on bright clothing did, heh heh, well done Debra, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2025
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Hi Roy, Thank you for your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
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A pleasure
Comment from Bill Schott
This lune poem, Unseen, has the proper formatting and suggests that those people are actually bulls attracted by the red cape that is moving before them.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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This lune poem, Unseen, has the proper formatting and suggests that those people are actually bulls attracted by the red cape that is moving before them.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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LOL! Funny that!
Thanks for your feedback Bill, best wishes, Debra :)
