Veil of Secrets
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Comment from Wy Jung
Another beguiling chapter Carol. I'm bound to finish read through them all tonight. I only wish they were in paper between covers so I could curl up with my cardamom and a blanket for the ride. :) Here's one little edit I offer up. I wonder if switching 'only' to the space before 'an existing relative' would read just a tad easier. 'stating that only an existing relative could sell the land'
Fortunately, Trevor left a clause in his will stating that an existing relative could only sell the land." -
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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Another beguiling chapter Carol. I'm bound to finish read through them all tonight. I only wish they were in paper between covers so I could curl up with my cardamom and a blanket for the ride. :) Here's one little edit I offer up. I wonder if switching 'only' to the space before 'an existing relative' would read just a tad easier. 'stating that only an existing relative could sell the land'
Fortunately, Trevor left a clause in his will stating that an existing relative could only sell the land." -
Comment Written 13-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2025
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I wish I had all of them published too. when I finish the fifth one I thik I will try marketing them as a series since the same characters are in them.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
It's becoming rather complicated now, I still can't understand why somebody dead can possibly gain anything material on earth, other than being alive Carol, folk like Eleanor and Danni have justice for the living, ideals cannot die, like love, beautifully written Carol, mind you it's a story, and interesting, well done, blessings Roy blessings
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It's becoming rather complicated now, I still can't understand why somebody dead can possibly gain anything material on earth, other than being alive Carol, folk like Eleanor and Danni have justice for the living, ideals cannot die, like love, beautifully written Carol, mind you it's a story, and interesting, well done, blessings Roy blessings
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
Comment from Carol Clark2
Eleanor to the rescue again! Good chapter, with lots of mystery and intrigue. I hope you're not killing off one of your main characters! LOL. Many interesting things are happening in this chapter, with good dialogue. Blessings. Carol
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Eleanor to the rescue again! Good chapter, with lots of mystery and intrigue. I hope you're not killing off one of your main characters! LOL. Many interesting things are happening in this chapter, with good dialogue. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, just like in the real world, there is so much diddling going on that you just never know who you might be kin to. I guess we need a birth certificate when we meet. Personally, I just ask to see their checking, savings, and last two deposits. :-) Thanks for sharing.
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Well, just like in the real world, there is so much diddling going on that you just never know who you might be kin to. I guess we need a birth certificate when we meet. Personally, I just ask to see their checking, savings, and last two deposits. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
Comment from LJbutterfly
So much is happening, my head is spinning. Eleanor sees blood and a badge. I hope Donatelli is not hurt again. Hopefully it's someone else's blood splatter on a badge. Since you started writing about ghosts, your descriptions of their actions and movements have become much more detailed and ghostly. As I read, I always imagine how Eleanor would look or float about or walk, on the big screen. I really enjoy her character.
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So much is happening, my head is spinning. Eleanor sees blood and a badge. I hope Donatelli is not hurt again. Hopefully it's someone else's blood splatter on a badge. Since you started writing about ghosts, your descriptions of their actions and movements have become much more detailed and ghostly. As I read, I always imagine how Eleanor would look or float about or walk, on the big screen. I really enjoy her character.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
Comment from karenina
A very informative chapter ~ Rebecca is beginning to learn the sordid history of the vineyard and what lies beneath. She has a half-sister she didn't know about and, therefore, a half-nephew in great danger. We know there was a lot of bad history beneath the vineyard -- now we have to find Donatelli and Garth! Elanor needs overtime "spirit pay" for this novel! You're doing a great job of keeping me intrigued!
Karenina
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A very informative chapter ~ Rebecca is beginning to learn the sordid history of the vineyard and what lies beneath. She has a half-sister she didn't know about and, therefore, a half-nephew in great danger. We know there was a lot of bad history beneath the vineyard -- now we have to find Donatelli and Garth! Elanor needs overtime "spirit pay" for this novel! You're doing a great job of keeping me intrigued!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this post with us. There's a lot going on and more to come. I can't wait.
Drugs and human trafficking?" (I'm interested if you're talking slave trading here? I guess exactly what time period?)
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Thank you for sharing this post with us. There's a lot going on and more to come. I can't wait.
Drugs and human trafficking?" (I'm interested if you're talking slave trading here? I guess exactly what time period?)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. The chapter synopsis is helpful since I missed the first few chapters. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
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This is another excellent chapter. The chapter synopsis is helpful since I missed the first few chapters. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
Comment from Jacob1395
I could feel Rebecca's shock and horror as she learned the truth about Webb, he certainly does seem like a nasty individual. Another excellent chapter, Carol. I really enjoyed reading it.
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I could feel Rebecca's shock and horror as she learned the truth about Webb, he certainly does seem like a nasty individual. Another excellent chapter, Carol. I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
Ramping up the action in a flurry of different directions here, Carol.
It's getting exciting.
Two out of the four threads splitting the action. Four... actually is it six?
Damn women, I am losing count of this tangled tapestry of intrigue.
Tim x
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Ramping up the action in a flurry of different directions here, Carol.
It's getting exciting.
Two out of the four threads splitting the action. Four... actually is it six?
Damn women, I am losing count of this tangled tapestry of intrigue.
Tim x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
