Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is a beautiful celebration of spring! I love how you capture the
season. The way you describe the sun's warmth is so peaceful The poem flows smoothly. Each line feels like a little moment of renewal. You really bring the season to life! Keep sharing these lovely glimpses of nature.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a wonderful jolly spring poem and I enjoyed the positivity, the rhymes and flow and wish you luck with the contest, I hope spring arrives soon, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

This is a great Rodeau poem. It has a nice rhyme scheme and flows nicely from beginning to end.

Spring is on of the best times of year. All fresh and full of renewal.

Well done and good luck in the contest.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2025

Comment from Jessica Borras

Excellent

What a beautiful poem about spring! "Each leaf and branch begin to sway,
In time with nature's grand ballet." I love this line! Imagery, is that the right word? You've done wonders with it. I can see the scenes you're setting. The rhythm flows really well, nothing along the way pulled me from the poem.

Thank you so much for sharing!

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2025

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

You created a good poem with a challenging form. Your rhymes flow well and you use good imagery. Your photo presentation supports your vivid words.

Best wishes,

Alex

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2025