Hills To Climb
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Comment from tempeste
Ciao Pookie,
I love those sloping verdant hills in the pic but of course you are talking about a different sorta a hill in your poem.
Life is made up of many hardships and just a few triumphs.
We experience many failures to reach a success.
Yes life is an ongoing series of hills to climb
At a certain age alas, those hills feel steeper too.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Ciao Pookie,
I love those sloping verdant hills in the pic but of course you are talking about a different sorta a hill in your poem.
Life is made up of many hardships and just a few triumphs.
We experience many failures to reach a success.
Yes life is an ongoing series of hills to climb
At a certain age alas, those hills feel steeper too.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thanks for the six stars!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice effort, Darla. The hills in your picture look inviting. Some of the hills in my life have been quite challenging, but some have been quite enjoyable.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Nice effort, Darla. The hills in your picture look inviting. Some of the hills in my life have been quite challenging, but some have been quite enjoyable.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
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Thanks!
Comment from Teri7
Darla, This is a very nice and very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose.Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Darla, This is a very nice and very well written Lune poem you have penned for the contest. You used good descriptive words and very lovely imagery from the artwork you chose.Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Thanks, I think it is worth six stars.
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you are so welcome! Teri
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No six stars?
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nope
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you need to let me know when you post something special or for a contest. I use my stars on works that feel are due them. I just don't have anymore. sorry!
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Ok
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I can't tell you when they are for a contest.
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I hope you have a very blessed day! love and blessings, Teri
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I am trying to get rid of my cough.
Comment from Lana Marie
, Is that why I came to earth to find those hills to climb... Lol those are actually pretty and look very inviting right now as our land here in my neck of the woods is covered with white stuff and it's very frigid. I woke up to it being -13° this morning.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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, Is that why I came to earth to find those hills to climb... Lol those are actually pretty and look very inviting right now as our land here in my neck of the woods is covered with white stuff and it's very frigid. I woke up to it being -13° this morning.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Thanks, where do you live?
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Hi, I'm in Minnesota, it's warmer today right now. It's 17°.
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Oh, and one more thing, let me say, I just love your picture. You're such a cute spunky, looking gal. I'm a fitness instructor and work with a lot of people that are in their 50s through their upper 80s. It's fun meeting different people here on fanstory
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Thanks!
Comment from Abigail May
This is a very sweet poem. It has me considering the double meaning of the metaphorical hills we all have to climb in our lives. Considering those in front of me now, it also lends some extra hope and motivation in moving ahead in my own life. I truly thank you for that. Thanks :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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This is a very sweet poem. It has me considering the double meaning of the metaphorical hills we all have to climb in our lives. Considering those in front of me now, it also lends some extra hope and motivation in moving ahead in my own life. I truly thank you for that. Thanks :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thanks, you are welcome.
