Little Hurts
Diatelle5 total reviews
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Share a diatelle poem writing prompt. Your poem follows the correct format and it reads smoothly with a clear message. Good luck.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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An excellent entry for the Share a diatelle poem writing prompt. Your poem follows the correct format and it reads smoothly with a clear message. Good luck.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
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Your kind words are appreciated. Thank you🙏🏿.
Comment from royowen
Oh dear, such sadness, and yes there is a lot of sadness, I'm happy that I'm living in a place that is relatively safe from all the crassness and kidnapping and murder going on. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Oh dear, such sadness, and yes there is a lot of sadness, I'm happy that I'm living in a place that is relatively safe from all the crassness and kidnapping and murder going on. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Roy! Give thanks and let's help however we can and pray on for our brothers and sisters who have not been so fortunate.
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Amen
Comment from Y. M. Roger
No sure I'd call it 'little hurts' as there are so many dark visions of large carnage depicted... but you've certainly fulfilled the contest requirements in your painting of those visions, so well done in that respect... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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No sure I'd call it 'little hurts' as there are so many dark visions of large carnage depicted... but you've certainly fulfilled the contest requirements in your painting of those visions, so well done in that respect... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thanks for reading and sharing your feedback. Always appreciative.
Comment from Bill Schott
This diatelle, Little Hurts, has the proper formatting and lists all things big and small that provide the stimulus of pain. It seems the list includes small items that are actually big ones.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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This diatelle, Little Hurts, has the proper formatting and lists all things big and small that provide the stimulus of pain. It seems the list includes small items that are actually big ones.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Appreciated Bill. Indeed, there are some big hurts in there.
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
This is sad. It is also unapologetically real. Nicely executed. The impact of war and cruelty humans impose on others are beyond words. Best of luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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This is sad. It is also unapologetically real. Nicely executed. The impact of war and cruelty humans impose on others are beyond words. Best of luck with the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
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Thank you. It is sad. I've been spending a lot more time listening to the news since the year turned. The stories about overseas wars are so distressing. It makes me appreciate my part of the vineyard even more. However, one can't ignore the senselessness of these conflicts and how they affect our fellow human beings.
