Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

Tang ling my mind, =4 (needs to be 5)
Threaded thoughts, -- COOL LINE!! love the play here!
I wish I could sew.

i tried sewing... when my daughter was in girl scouts... i gave up lol

great lune with cool, thought-provoking imagery
smooth flow with good line connection

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025

Thank you for catching my syllable count and I'm glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Such a beautiful image of our inner universe: "Tangling my mind,
Threaded thoughts,
I wish I could sew." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025

Thank you so much.