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Tomato Paste

for pizza toppings

3 total reviews 
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I think for drama this does it for me! Each 2 syllable word is meticulously chosen and fits beautifully into the pictured scene. A nice, fluent, rhyming couplet too. Well done and good luck:) Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Nicely done! I really enjoy how the words flow together so naturally. Your poem made me hungry with "rich red gleamy, steamy paste"! It's such a fun poem. Keep it up! Your playful style brings a lot of charm to the poem!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Frankly I don’t use tomatoes paste but it made a neat rhyme with taste so I wrote my wee poem around taste/ paste.

    Getting your taste buds to water was an unexpected bonus , glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This lune, Tomato Paste, has the proper formatting and, with the video, reminds the readers that some of the greatest tastes we know can be brought to life in our own homes. Neat.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    I totally agree !

    This entry is for the Tyburn contest .. 4 descriptive words followed by two sentences using the 4 descriptive words.

    Thank you for the kind comment .. homemade cuisine is definitely the better choice. ( wink)