Subway Connections
The mind and interactions of the author on the subway4 total reviews
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is an interesting journey, Morris.
The way you turn a commute into an exploration and examination of the lives around the protagonist was very well managed.
We learn nothing about the one doing the observing, but at the same time, so much.
An excellent first post. Welcome to FanStory.
Tim
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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This is an interesting journey, Morris.
The way you turn a commute into an exploration and examination of the lives around the protagonist was very well managed.
We learn nothing about the one doing the observing, but at the same time, so much.
An excellent first post. Welcome to FanStory.
Tim
Comment Written 27-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Thanks Tim!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Excellent writing. Good work.
Couldn't see a thing to improve upon, except maybe the decision to attempt a flip on the subway. (They were laughing 'at you. - smiley face here)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Excellent writing. Good work.
Couldn't see a thing to improve upon, except maybe the decision to attempt a flip on the subway. (They were laughing 'at you. - smiley face here)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2025
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Haha Wayne. Thank you!
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Congrats on your first post! I really enjoyed how your story brought the subway to life! The way you observe the world around you is so enjoyable to read. I love how you show the connections between people. Your curiosity and sense of adventure make it a fun read. I appreciate how you let us step into your world through your eyes!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Congrats on your first post! I really enjoyed how your story brought the subway to life! The way you observe the world around you is so enjoyable to read. I love how you show the connections between people. Your curiosity and sense of adventure make it a fun read. I appreciate how you let us step into your world through your eyes!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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I appreciate you Michael. haha, thanks.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very interesting reflection. I subscribe to these lines, and you are right each of us are carrying a mystery everyday when I use public transport. " am tempted to unravel each individual's narrative on the train as though they are rich characters in a novel. With the adventures of Holden Caulfield in my hand, I consider that I might be his equally observant, curious, and spontaneous counterpart, only less cynical and jaded." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Very interesting reflection. I subscribe to these lines, and you are right each of us are carrying a mystery everyday when I use public transport. " am tempted to unravel each individual's narrative on the train as though they are rich characters in a novel. With the adventures of Holden Caulfield in my hand, I consider that I might be his equally observant, curious, and spontaneous counterpart, only less cynical and jaded." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thanks! It's more on the reflective side as I used it for my personal statement on my college application.
