On Moonlit Nights
calming hope inspires the night5 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great Tyburn poem. You have followed the rules of the contest guide lines. You have incorporated the words in the other sentences.
Well done
Cecilia
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This is a great Tyburn poem. You have followed the rules of the contest guide lines. You have incorporated the words in the other sentences.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 21-Jan-2025
Comment from papa55mike
A quiet hope is a powerful force inside an open heart. Now that's a prompt. This is a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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A quiet hope is a powerful force inside an open heart. Now that's a prompt. This is a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from Bill Schott
This tyburn, On Moonlit Nights, has the proper formatting and calls in the quiet and solemn power of the overlooking orb that shines on all activities.
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This tyburn, On Moonlit Nights, has the proper formatting and calls in the quiet and solemn power of the overlooking orb that shines on all activities.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
I enjoyed the topic , I'm a sci fi nerd. ( biggrin)
PS when I tried this format the first time , I received from the committee a note advising me that ING is not considered a rhyme.
You need at LEAST 4 or more letters the same when ending in ING
Eg:
singing... sin ging
banging. .. ban ging
begging... beg ging
bragging.. brag ging
bringing.. brin ging
As you can see all the verbs end in GING
The first two have 5 letters the same
si.. nging
ba... nging
Best of luck!
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Ciao !
I enjoyed the topic , I'm a sci fi nerd. ( biggrin)
PS when I tried this format the first time , I received from the committee a note advising me that ING is not considered a rhyme.
You need at LEAST 4 or more letters the same when ending in ING
Eg:
singing... sin ging
banging. .. ban ging
begging... beg ging
bragging.. brag ging
bringing.. brin ging
As you can see all the verbs end in GING
The first two have 5 letters the same
si.. nging
ba... nging
Best of luck!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed the peaceful feel of your poem! I love how you described the moon's light as both gentle and full of hope. It makes the poem feel really uplifting. Great job creating such a beautiful image! Keep it up!
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I really enjoyed the peaceful feel of your poem! I love how you described the moon's light as both gentle and full of hope. It makes the poem feel really uplifting. Great job creating such a beautiful image! Keep it up!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
