Until We Meet Again
My wish for you, my friend . . .8 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
A sweet poem/ prayer of hope to impart a better day and Spring's gentle breeze (who doesn't need that?) to a friend. Beautiful offering in 20 syllables. Sending you my best today as always and my good wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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A sweet poem/ prayer of hope to impart a better day and Spring's gentle breeze (who doesn't need that?) to a friend. Beautiful offering in 20 syllables. Sending you my best today as always and my good wishes for the contest.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your encouraging review today.
Comment from Mrs Anna Howard
This poem is simply beautiful and bittersweet at the same time. Thank you for writing this. You have my vote. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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This poem is simply beautiful and bittersweet at the same time. Thank you for writing this. You have my vote. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for the encouraging review. Stay warm out there!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Yvette,
We all need this now here in Minnesota where it is below zero. A little warmth would do us well. The man in the artwork seems to be embracing the day and its warmth and beauty. The poem is very hopeful.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Hi Yvette,
We all need this now here in Minnesota where it is below zero. A little warmth would do us well. The man in the artwork seems to be embracing the day and its warmth and beauty. The poem is very hopeful.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your review.
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No problem,
Joan
Comment from kiwisteveh
This is a pretty piece. No true rhyme, but I'll credit you with the use of assonance in its place with shade/days and breeze/need.
Nice presentation too. I expect this will do well in the contest. Good luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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This is a pretty piece. No true rhyme, but I'll credit you with the use of assonance in its place with shade/days and breeze/need.
Nice presentation too. I expect this will do well in the contest. Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Your prayers in a poem meets the 20 syllables writing contest rules. I love the sentiment and the depth of the poem as expressed. Thanks for sending this prayer. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Your prayers in a poem meets the 20 syllables writing contest rules. I love the sentiment and the depth of the poem as expressed. Thanks for sending this prayer. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Julie G1
Well expressed. This verse depicts an appropriate and evocative response to the prompt. The poet meets the challenge of the limiting format successfully. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Well expressed. This verse depicts an appropriate and evocative response to the prompt. The poet meets the challenge of the limiting format successfully. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from lancellot
This is a very nice and warm sentiment. The poetry has good presentation to match the overall positive theme. And I like how you made that last line fit, so you didn't go over the syllable count limit. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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This is a very nice and warm sentiment. The poetry has good presentation to match the overall positive theme. And I like how you made that last line fit, so you didn't go over the syllable count limit. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from June Sargent
A poem full of comfort and peace in a world that sorely needs some now. Sunshine and soft breezes provide great imagery in just a few words. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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A poem full of comfort and peace in a world that sorely needs some now. Sunshine and soft breezes provide great imagery in just a few words. Well done.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your review.
