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Watching Children Play

They are closest to Godliness

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Comment from Boogienights
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You are right! Your words are so true. When I watch my granddaughter play, it truly is the best part of the day. I'm looking forward to my daughter having a second child in may....a boy! Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Hi Sharon, congrats for the awesome news of the baby boy on the way. I am so happy for you. In fact I am a little envious. My grandkids are all growing up so fast.

    So, thanks for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much, my dear friend. The contest is over and I took second place for this one.
    Love, Debi
Comment from Barry Penfold
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Nice entry. Spot on with the wording and how true it is. It certainly would be the best part of the day. Thanks for sharing. Love the image. Take care and have a most wonderful day. Best of luck in the competition.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Hey Barry, thanks for the sweet review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. The contest is over now and I took second place for this one. Thanks so much tho, my awesome friend. Love, Debi
Comment from nomi338
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When the subject is about something you love and enjoy, it should not take a dictionary's worth of words to tell or narrate. As a great grandfather, I take great delight in watching my young descendants invent scenarios to entertain themselves as they play with total abandon.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    My dear Nomi, thanks for the sweet review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. I love this picture so much too. You are a great great grandpa, my dear BBBB. Don't ever forget how much you are loved.
    Love ya, Debi
reply by nomi338 on 22-Jan-2025
    God has been kind enough to allow me the privilege.
Comment from harmony13
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The author's words are a blessing, descriptive and creative. Yes, I agree
with the author, watching children play and have fun is the best part of
many of my days! The artwork is awesome and compliment both the
theme and words of this poem! Great Picture, Debi!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Thanks Maria for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. I. Feel the same as you do about watching children at play. They are like little angels that make us smile all the time.
    Lotsa love and hugs, Debi
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Debi,

This is a great 20 syllable poem. I would expect nothing less from you. You are the queen of the poems.

Hope all is well for you and you're doing well.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2025
    Thanks Cecilia for the awesome review and fun comments. I do appreciate them very much. I love watching children at play. They are like little angels that make us smile all the time.
    Lotsa love and hugs, Debi
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 22-Jan-2025
    You're welcome
Comment from papa55mike
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Watching them play and discover new things on their own is delightful in many ways. This is a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Thanks so much, Mike. I appreciate your wishes for the contest too.
    I love children too. Thanks again!!!
Comment from Andrea Kepple
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I love the sentiment of your poem. The infectiousness of watching children playing, when they are allowed to find their own way in their play, is something adults tend to lose as we mature.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Awe, thank you so very much for your sweet review and your very kind words. I appreciate the vote of confidence. And I agree with you completely.
Comment from Tim Margetts
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As a father and grandfather I can confirm the truth of this 20 syllable poem.
And I love the picture you have chosen to illustrate it.
The two go together so well.
Good luck in the contest.
Tim

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Awe, thank you so very much for your sweet review and your very kind words. I appreciate the vote of confidence. And I agree with you completely.
    Thanks also for the good luck wishes for the contest
Comment from Charlotte Morse
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Oh it definitely is!!! Such a joy, even when they are strangers.
Nicely written and placed neatly in a nutshell.
I love the photo you've used to, they look like they're having so much fun.
Good luck in the contest.
Charlotte

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Awe, thank you so very much for your sweet review and your very kind words. I appreciate the vote of confidence. And I agree with you completely
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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This is a very sweet poem and it's already creating a giggle in my mind, because I just watched my kittens playing... well they are my children. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2025
    Awe, thank you so very much for your sweet review and your very kind words. I appreciate the vote of confidence. And I agree with you completely