Downtime
This thought is about a quote that I read.13 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your poem delivers a powerful message for a stress free, healthy lifestyle. Down time is essential, and you've included several ideas the allow you to sit peacefully and reflect. My favorite is...viewing the bright blue sky.
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Your poem delivers a powerful message for a stress free, healthy lifestyle. Down time is essential, and you've included several ideas the allow you to sit peacefully and reflect. My favorite is...viewing the bright blue sky.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Thank you for stopping by reading my work and leaving such a nice review
Comment from jim vecchio
Wish I could do those things without biopsies and hospital trips interfering. What happened to those days when these things came so natural? Now, I have a deeper appreciation of them.
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Wish I could do those things without biopsies and hospital trips interfering. What happened to those days when these things came so natural? Now, I have a deeper appreciation of them.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work as a
Comment from Mintybee
This is a beautiful nonet with clear, effective description. There is a philosophical statement that quickly zeros in on something concrete that the reader can easily grasp, then it moves back up to a broad view of the sky. The movement and change in focus worked well for me.
Mintybee
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This is a beautiful nonet with clear, effective description. There is a philosophical statement that quickly zeros in on something concrete that the reader can easily grasp, then it moves back up to a broad view of the sky. The movement and change in focus worked well for me.
Mintybee
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
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I am grateful when I get nice reviews like
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is sweet and lovely. I like nonets. Part of it is the shape. I feel like I have really accomplished something when I reach the end. You have a good weekend. Karen
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This is sweet and lovely. I like nonets. Part of it is the shape. I feel like I have really accomplished something when I reach the end. You have a good weekend. Karen
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Your reviews are always special thank you so much
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You are very welcome. Karen
Comment from royowen
I think sometimes we just simply need a break from what we're doing and take a rest from the herdy Gerdy of life. It's a marvellous thing indeed, you've written a beautifully crafted nonet Pat, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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I think sometimes we just simply need a break from what we're doing and take a rest from the herdy Gerdy of life. It's a marvellous thing indeed, you've written a beautifully crafted nonet Pat, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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With gratitude of my heart, I wish to thank you for a nice review
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Welcome
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful and true. Without it life gets tedious, we all need that break of relaxation.
Very nicely written Nonet poem. Thank you for sharing with me. I live the rich and vibrant color scheme.
RJ
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Beautiful and true. Without it life gets tedious, we all need that break of relaxation.
Very nicely written Nonet poem. Thank you for sharing with me. I live the rich and vibrant color scheme.
RJ
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
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As always, thank you for a very nice review.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
We all need downtime in our lives. today's world is way too stressful not to have downtime to recharge our batteries. nicely written poem i will tell you if I see the other copies.
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We all need downtime in our lives. today's world is way too stressful not to have downtime to recharge our batteries. nicely written poem i will tell you if I see the other copies.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Thank you for this very nice review
Comment from Sugarray77
I felt refreshed after reading your lovely poem, Patricia. The sky blue background compliments the closing thoughts you put into your final lines. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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I felt refreshed after reading your lovely poem, Patricia. The sky blue background compliments the closing thoughts you put into your final lines. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your kind review and I am happy that you feel refreshed after having read my poem.
Comment from Sally Law
Dear Patriotic,
A lovely nonet for your quote too, and beautifully formed. A wonderful thought as I begin my reviewing day. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings abundant.
Sally XOs
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Dear Patriotic,
A lovely nonet for your quote too, and beautifully formed. A wonderful thought as I begin my reviewing day. Sending you my best today as always, and blessings abundant.
Sally XOs
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your lovely review but I think when you did the first line you said dear patriotic and I think you meant to say, dear Patricia.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I want to just jump into your poem and relax Patricia as this is how your words made me feel. I am lucky enough to have as much downtime as I want, but instead I put pressure on myself to achieve something everyday and if I don't I feel like I have failed. I enjoyed your uplifting words, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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I want to just jump into your poem and relax Patricia as this is how your words made me feel. I am lucky enough to have as much downtime as I want, but instead I put pressure on myself to achieve something everyday and if I don't I feel like I have failed. I enjoyed your uplifting words, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for taking the time. I'm glad that you felt like you could jump right into the poem. I too like to have my downtime. Patricia
