Quirky Foibles
dance whimsically in a zany world6 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute little poem, and i like the roundness of the narrative and actions. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest, You got my vote.
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Cute little poem, and i like the roundness of the narrative and actions. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest, You got my vote.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
I am a lover of nonsense rhyme and have written a few in my time.
This certainly fits that style that I love so well done.
An enjoyable and irreverent poem.
Tim
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I am a lover of nonsense rhyme and have written a few in my time.
This certainly fits that style that I love so well done.
An enjoyable and irreverent poem.
Tim
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is such a clever journey into the quirks of humanity! I love how you personified traits like Pride, Forgetfulness, and Procrastination. The playful rhymes create a lighthearted feel. The last stanza ties it all together so wonderfully. This was a joy to read!
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Your poem is such a clever journey into the quirks of humanity! I love how you personified traits like Pride, Forgetfulness, and Procrastination. The playful rhymes create a lighthearted feel. The last stanza ties it all together so wonderfully. This was a joy to read!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
I think you're right about humanity, mo matter how it seems to us, depending on the colours of our moods and manners, we are all pretty quirky, and sometimes we're feel so vulnerable, we don't let that quirkiness hang out, well done, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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I think you're right about humanity, mo matter how it seems to us, depending on the colours of our moods and manners, we are all pretty quirky, and sometimes we're feel so vulnerable, we don't let that quirkiness hang out, well done, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from TPAC
I agree after all the dust gave settled, we will still be able to absorb God's intentions for humanity. Humanity meaning the willingness to assist and aids others as Jesus tried. All stated in my given opinion.
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I agree after all the dust gave settled, we will still be able to absorb God's intentions for humanity. Humanity meaning the willingness to assist and aids others as Jesus tried. All stated in my given opinion.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well, my creation of this challenge has been a success, Having one as famous as you made me joyful, honestly.
I do ask you review ... and I could be wrong, but shouldn't ballet be pluralized since foibles are?
Quirky Foibles rule the day,
Dancing in their quirky ballet.
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Well, my creation of this challenge has been a success, Having one as famous as you made me joyful, honestly.
I do ask you review ... and I could be wrong, but shouldn't ballet be pluralized since foibles are?
Quirky Foibles rule the day,
Dancing in their quirky ballet.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
