A.W.O.L - Absence Without Leave
Capricious Thoughts entry5 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I like the font is so Star Wars and actually creates that sensation of a galaxy far away, field with mysteries, and still going in circles around the human nature. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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I like the font is so Star Wars and actually creates that sensation of a galaxy far away, field with mysteries, and still going in circles around the human nature. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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Welcome to the Zany world of yours truly. Got any snow?? :-))
I appreciate the joy you received from my recent post. If you have the time you could venture to see the depth of many genres. Even I do not know when and where I head.
Comment from TPAC
Feelings. Nothing but feelings. Things gather and rolled within the mouth before swallowing. I got the music contained in this particular work: finding all aspects appealing to my interests.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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Feelings. Nothing but feelings. Things gather and rolled within the mouth before swallowing. I got the music contained in this particular work: finding all aspects appealing to my interests.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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I appreciate the response but what music?
Comment from royowen
I have a theory that all writers are dreamers, how else do they conch stories to write, and where do those stories come from? From dreamers who imagine all sorts of things, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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I have a theory that all writers are dreamers, how else do they conch stories to write, and where do those stories come from? From dreamers who imagine all sorts of things, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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Always thankful for your retorts, yet I need ask how does one CONCH a story? hmmm
Looking in the dictionary, I suspect if someone like me pens crazy inanities, crazy can/does SPIRAL out of control.
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That's ok, writing brings relief,
Comment from Gayla putnam
Your poem's cadence is perfect. It flows. I think my own mind is in the twilight zone. I liked that line, and thanks for explaining who Chester Nimitz is. After two lines, I started to smile. It's a great humorous poem. gayla
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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Your poem's cadence is perfect. It flows. I think my own mind is in the twilight zone. I liked that line, and thanks for explaining who Chester Nimitz is. After two lines, I started to smile. It's a great humorous poem. gayla
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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If only I had begun my schtick earlier in life. I may have made it to Hollywood! Thank you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is a delightful ride with unexpected turns! I loved the playful way you described your mind wandering. The back and forth between clarity and confusion was perfect. I really appreciated how your writing pulled me into a unique world. Keep going - your imagination is captivating!
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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Your poem is a delightful ride with unexpected turns! I loved the playful way you described your mind wandering. The back and forth between clarity and confusion was perfect. I really appreciated how your writing pulled me into a unique world. Keep going - your imagination is captivating!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2025
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My mind has been deemed ridiculous, mind-expanding, eclectic, electric but I don't recall captivating. If so, it matches my physique at 6'6/325. Thanks M.L.
